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NOTICE by Author: It has really been long since I pulled up my fanfic. I will be summarizing Act 1 by the next chapter. Then we will move on to Act 2. All has been planned out except I didn't have the time. Chapter 10 will be mainly about the battle at Natharion :hint: :hint:
Currently having examinations for 2 weeks. In 2 weeks time I will complete chapter 10. Expect great stuff.
I deeply apologise to my readers for this long delay.
Ps. This is a notice so please don't warn me for double posting =p
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Chapter 10 - Legend
The last rays of sunlight were already starting to fade away.
As the undead marched closer, Sven could feel the adrenaline pumping inside him. Long had he wanted to crush the undead in a major battle.
"If we survive today, our tale will be a glorious one indeed. But if we die, we still will be remembered. Remembered as the fortress and the men who stood, side by side, facing the undead threat. This is how we will be remembered!! " Yurnero roared.
"THIS IS HOW LEGENDS ARE BORN!!"
"CHAARRRGEEE!" roared Sven as the undead warriors came into shooting range.
As Sven lead the wedge-like charge, he felt the wind blow in his face and knew, it could be the last time he ever felt it.
The few seconds before contact passed sooner than expected.
The cannons boomed from behind them, starting the attack.
*BAM*
*BAM*
Many undead flew lifeless into the sky as the shells landed and exploded in the vast army.
Contact
In a split second after the shells had broke charge of the undead, the two armies collided.
Just as expected, the wedge shaped charge managed to cleave the undead forces in two, throwing them into even bigger disarray.
"Engage!" roared Sven as the men threw aside their spears and unsheathed their broadswords.
The soldiers attacked the confused undead.
Sven roared a battlecry and instantly flew at the undead masses.
Swinging Justice in wide circles and gaining momentum Sven dealt and parried blows at suprising speed and power.
The ghouls that we're trying to swarm him were either bashed into pieces or sliced neatly in halves by Sven's relentless attack.
As the icy skeleton watched Sven expertly cleave through the ranks of the undead, he knew he must do something about it.
Abbadon saw Kel Thuzad's gaze and nodded, heading to handle the red orc who was also killing masses of undead, only more gracefully.
Sven was still crushing the undead warriors when he sensed a presence nearby.
As he swerved round, he was hit by a chilling blast that seemed to freeze his muscles.
This slowed down his movements and made him an easy target for the fast ghouls.
In seconds, Sven was piled on by more than a dozen undead warriors. Ghouls and skeletons alike, all trying desperately to rend his flesh off his bone.
Just as Kel Thuzad turned around to help Abbadon something made Kel Thuzad turn in surprise.
Beams of light were filtering through the mass of undead that was trying to claw their way to Sven.
*BAM*
The undead flew high in the sky and landed on the ground, breaking up on impact.
As the dust settled, Sven emerged, holding his halberd high, he challenged the lich.
"Battle me lich! Your kind being one of the foulest of the undead must die!" rumbled Sven in a deep voice unlike his own.
The lich hissed, cold torrents of air escaping it.
Instead of replying with words, the lich tossed a freezing ball of ice at Sven.
Sven calmly walked forward and thrust Justice into the icy ball.
It exploded, blanketing the area in a chilling wave.
As if not affected by it at all, Sven charged at the lich, halberd slashing even more ferociously than before.
As the lich turned to run, Sven jumped high in the air and brought his weapon crashing down on the prone lich. The magicians were known for their vulnerability after all.
The blow instantly shattered the lich that burst in a surge of icy wind.
In the distance he could see Yurnero and a death knight locked in combat.
"NOW!" he shouted.
All the footmen immediately lay flat on the ground and blocked their bodies with their shields.
A rain of arrows and spells rained down from where Traxex and Nurmengraff were.
The undead fell in vast numbers. Necromancers didn't have a chance to revive their dead and recreate new warriors as they too were caught by surprise.
A huge lightning bolt struck a necromancer and started bouncing, incinerating them.
As the undead were trying to regroup the warriors stood up from their defensive positions and started attacking again.
Sven smiled, they might actually win this.
And instantly regretted it.
Upon seeing his allies fall victim the the volley of arrows and spells, Abbadon had casted a shield on himself to take the main damage from the spells and arrows.
He casted an incantation and pointed at the sky.
A glowing portal appeared, glowing a sinister green hue.
Suddenly an entire flight of frost wyrms flew from the portal, snarling and snapping, waiting for orders.
Abbadon conjured up a second portal, this time on the ground.
Within seconds, an endless stream of undead was pouring out of the portal.
Sven gaped in horror. This current assault that they had managed to defeat was merely the scourge's advance skirmish party.
The main task was to get the Sentinels to use up any traps they had planned. It worked.
Sven knew that all had been lost. But he also knew that he must not show the men weakness or they might face an even more terrible defeat.
"Take heart men! We are few and they are many! But we still outclass these beasts! For the Sentinels, Charge!" Sven roared.
Not very much assured now, the sentinels followed their captain to certain death.
Abbadon had managed to defeat the orc in a difficult battle and all that was left of the red orc was a headless body.
"Wyrms, you know what to do!" he commanded.
The frost wryms swooped in on the rangers and mages who were not expecting it.
Abbadon had it all planned. Since the wyrms were dragons they had tough hide that made a good natural resistance against arrows and spells.
Zeus and Traxex were frantically throwing all they had left at the frost dragons or better known as wyrms.
"It's no use," said Zeus, sending another bolt of lightning at the nearest frost wrym.
His efforts were only rewarded by his lightning bolts bouncing off harmlessly.
Many of the mages and archers were falling victims to the icy breath and mauls of the fearsome dragons.
When all hope was thought to be lost, a war horn sounded.
Sven who was already tiring from the sheer numbers of ghouls he had to hold off looked up.
Was there yet hope for his men and Natharion?
From a small hillock at the corner of the battlefield, a shape emerged. It was a treant. Suddenly, about a hundred treants flooded down the hill onto the undead army.
Taller than most, a giant treat they called Rooftrellen the Treant Protector emerged, waving his massive branches.
Then, suddenly a mighty roar came from the south.
As sven looked, he managed to make out the figures of a flight of chimeras. Jakiro and his rogue chimeras to be exact.
Upon sighting their dreaded adversaries, jakiro and the chimeras sped towards the frost wryms, sending balls of flame at them.
The wryms, being one of the toughest and strongest dragons, merely shrugged off these attacks and closed in, slashing the chimeras with their icy talons.
"Oh my god, even with the reinforcements, we are losing" Sven frowned, blood seeping out from his injured leg.
Suddenly, the ghouls he was fighting parted and made way for the death knight who was riding straight at Sven with a death look in his eye.
Swerving to the left to avoid being impaled by the frostmourne, Sven readied himself for battle.
The death knight smiled and dismounted his own horse.
Exchanging blows, neither opponent would give in.
Sven felt himself slow, not because of his wounds, but some effect the frostmourne had seemed to chill Sven right to his very soul.
"Give up?" sneered Abbadon.
"Never!" Sven wiped blood off the corner of his lip and tried to shake off the freezing cold sensation that was spreading around his body.
"I can see it in your eyes, rogue knight, it is only a matter of time before you succumb to the might of my frostmourne!!" Abbadon laughed sinisterly.
Abbadon and Sven engaged again, this time, the chilling effect was really taking its toll on Sven as he dragged his feet and fought to keep balanced. Abbadon on the other hand seemed to get faster and faster with each hit.
Without any warning signs whatsoever, Abbadon thrust frostmourne into Sven's gut.
By this time, Sven didn't have the strength to even cry out, he merely sputtered and fell to the ground, bleeding to death.
Abbadon laughed again and bent down. "You night elves are all the same, whether mixed blooded or pure, you fell right into my trap by bringing reinforcements. We only meant to weaken the forces of the Sentinel. Natharion was a bonus," then, He stood up, mounted his horse and rode out of Sven's blur view.
Sven tried to raise his head to see how his comrades were doing but he feared the worst. Before he fell he had seen Rooftrellen and his brave treants fall prey to a sea of ghouls.
Jakiro's high pitch scream pierced the night air as he was impaled by three frost wryms at once.
A huge tremor through ground marked the end of the mighty dragon's life.
Yurnero's words were right after all. Even if they died here, they died a legend.
And with that, Sven closed his eyes, succumbing to the sweet darkness.
~~End of Act 1~~
Act 2 coming soon.
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wow...
that was truly impressive Amp
too bad all of them died lol. It was like OWN>FAIL>HOPE>EPIC FAIL. this story is SICK (in a good way)!
but anyways.....
WOOT! You continued! Cant wait for the next chapter
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Thanks
As the next act comes round, we are going to focus more on Magina and his story. I have it roughly planned out in my head.
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Wow!
very interesting AMP . .
i pictured the battle in my head . .
heheh . .
very nice! . .
continue!
i hope to read more. .
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Thanks bish. Glad you liked it =]
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holy crap i loved it you truly are my romodel on this fan fic thing try looking at my story its still in progress but i think im getting better
i like how the good guys didnt win its kinda rare
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Thank you. Yes, good guys don't always win, but they might in the next act.
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aww that was so sad...sven, jakiro, treant, and yurnero died....yurnero never used his omnislash...treant didn't use overgrowth, and only sven and jakiro used their ultimates...that was sad...really sad...but I liked the part when Lich died...HAHAHAHAHA!!! he was sliced clean by sven!!! the only thing that made me laugh was when lich died and when yurnero was headless hahahahah!!!
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They don't need to use their skills though =p It is a sotry after all, not a game xD
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u could have made yurnero's battle more detailed ffs. I freakin hate abadon ,that bastard
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abbadon is like my arthas hes my favorite because hes like torn between light/darkness and eventually i guess darkness wins but now hes all like badass and shitl olz
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Hehe Yurnero and Arthas fan I see..in the next act I might...just might be able to slit in how Yurnero died, as a flashback or something similar.
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