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Shadow of Vengance (Chapter 13 - Take care its a long one)
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Should I continue with this?
No ending time set.
Hell yeah! 78% [ 66 ]
Hell no! 21% [ 18 ]
Lol looking forward to the rest.
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nice one!
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Better to Die then to Fade Away....
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awesomely awesome
cant wait for the next chapter!
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hey ,man i must admit I started the story with some skepticism but by chapter 4 i was hooked. Keep it up. I am new to dota but a hardened veteran in all sorts of fantasy fiction i have my remarks but mostly I will say that that the idea is good and that is what matters. You have devoted readers now so add more detail make them longer. Pozdrav od Makedonija
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Lol Ursa to kill Rosh! Finish him!
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@gunslinger.. it's been for a while now. when will the next chapter arrive? cant wait.. hehe
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Well....school was a bitch the last week. I think it will be done in a 2 or 3 days...I'm working on it, about half of the 10th chapter is done now...
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Bwahahaha I finished it! Chapter 10! I did! I do not know how, dont ask me, but I know I did it! Bwahahahah *submits the post and faints from lack of sleap*
Rotund’jere stood helpless before Zeus. He was the prey now, he was the one who will perish. How do the tides turn so fast? Nobody knows. But that they do, they do. And now, they did not turn in favor of the once great, but now so tiny necrolyte.
“We can...we can sort this out Zeus.” Mutered the Necrolyte. He fealt fear. For the first time in hundreds of years, he fealt that ,which he thought was long gone in him. Fear. And then, he remembered, he remembered all, the pain the suffering, the inevitable death. And the fear was gone.
“You tried to kill me. The punishment for such an act is death.” Replyed Zeus. His voice lound and mighty in the nothingness. Rotund’jere heard, as well as he fealt its power. But still, he could work his way out of this.
Zeus concentrated his powers, for one killing blow. Ratund’jere waited. Waited in silence. He knew what must be done. There was only one way. He hated to do this but it was that or destruction.
At the same moment in which Zeus released his powerfull blow, Rotund’jere opened himself to it, taking it fully and disapearing into nothingness.
Zeus was suprised it was this easy. No resistance? No battle? He just gave in? Starteled, Zues searched for the Necrolytes power in both this and the ream world, nightmare realm, the void and the nethers. Nothing. He was nowhere. He was destroyed. Relived, Zeus connected to his body and opened his eyes.
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“Do you even know where Ulfsaar is?” asked Shendelzare.
“No.” answered Lanaya briefly, which stoped Shendelzare in her tracks.
“How do you mean that?”
“Its simple. I do not know where he is.”
“Then how are we supposed to find him!? Do you expect to see a sign saying “This way to Ulfsaar”!?” yeled Shendelzare. She was angered by Lanayas behaving. She lead her down this path for more than an hour already, and now she says she does not know where the Ursa Warrior actualy is? It was ironicly funny.
“No.” again said Lanaya, calm, undisturbed ”He has been mising for some time actualy. But I think I know a way to locate him. Don’t ask any more questions anymore and folow me.” And she continued walking down the path.
Shendlezare groaned in discontent, but continued to folow Lanaya. And an invisible figure in the shadows was folowing both of them.
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Terrorblade stoped in his tracks. He felt a tickle in his mind.
“Why are you calling me now? I have other things to do?” spoke Terrorblade to someone unseen.
“I am not calling you.” Spoke the voice “Unfortunatly, I am in your mind.”
Terrorblade laughed. “You were defeated? Bwah! I guess you were too self confident Rotund’jere. As usual.”
“Unfortunatly I was defeated. This was my last resort. Now, help me find a new body.”
“And why should I? You are now in my mind, under my full power. I can destroy you if I wish.” Said Terrorblade confidently. Maybe too confident.
“Not realy.” Spoke Rotund’jere calmly.
The Soul Keeper screamed as his whole body became usless, struck by pain, his every nerve tingling on the brink of breakdown. He was barely able to breathe.
“As you see,” continued Rotund’jere, still completely calm, completely selfconfident. But with a reson. “I am not helpless. Actualy, quite the oposite. You are in my complete control. I could destroy your soul and keep your body, but that’s risky. The Lich King would notice it. And not only him. And besides, you are far more usefull to me as a person than as an empty shell.”
Terrorblade finaly feeded some air to his lungs, as the excruciating pain finaly stoped. He than womited onto the black ground.
“I think I proved my point.” Said the Necrolyte, as Terrorblade continued to womit the his last meal mixed with blood and gall. The ground in front of him grew red, with pieces of half-digested food on it.
As he finaly emptied his belly, he colapsed on the ground “What do you.... want... from me?” he barely spoke.
“I will explain on the way. Now head towoards Roshans lair. I know the Lich King sent you there, and I know why.” He paused “I know the real reason he sent you there. And that will be my triumph. Now go, we don’t have much time. A body of a person cant hold twon souls at the same time and last long. Especialy a soul as powerfull as mine. You have about one day to get rid of me at the best, and then you die. But you probably wont last another four hours. ” Terrorblades eyes widened. He was terrified “Don’t worry. You wont die. Its not in my interest.” The Soul Keeper didn’t move an inch, he didn’t even blink “Now go god damn you!” shouted Rotund’jere “There isnt much time left!”
Terrorblade slowly stood up, as he fealt the Necrolyte hasting his movements with some unknown enchantment, he ran towoards Roshans lair with incredible speed driven by the unholy Necrolyte.
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“Don’t you think that’s a little strange?” said Mortred “He gave up so easy. That simply doesn’t seam like something he would do.”
“Indeed. It is peculiar.” Replyed Mercurial “But he had no way of escaping.” She paused “Or atleast not a one that I know off. Buut the fact remains that I do not feel him anywhere.”
“Me neither. But still....he isnt the one that would just give up.”
Both Mercurail and Mortred where completely confused by Rotund’jeres actions.
“If only they knew...” thought Darkterror who was sitting on a cliff above them. And then he disapeared.
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Zeus opened his eyes. Purist, Furion and Azwraith all rushed to his side immediately.
“Im fine, I’m fine.” Said Zeus, while getting up “Its all fine lads. No need to do...that.”
“Are you sure?” said Azwraith “What actualy happened? Who was draining the life out of you? How did you break free?” he was on a spree. Luckily Furion stoped him.
“Do not ask so many questions Azwraith.” He said “I think that Zeus himself isnt even sure what actualy happened.”
“That is right Furion. I am not quite sure, was it all a nightmare, a delusion, or something else.” He lost his balance and almost fell, when Purist caught him. “Thank you lad.” He said, and sat on the ground, deciding its better to wait a little before trying to stand up again.
“So, what do you remember? What happened?” asked Purist. He hope that the things that happened to Zeus might reveal the identity of the traitor. He searched for him hoplessly for too long.
“Well, at first, it was all dark” started Zeus “and then I found myself...somewhere. It was not dark...but there was no light either. I cannot explain it. It just felt empty. And, suddenly, I had all my god powers back. Anyway, I fealt that someone who is draining the life out of me, atleast my body, was there. I found him. It was someone I never saw or fealth before. He was not alive, but I do not know if he was from the scourge or not. In any case, I came up to him and...someone else was there. Dark. Also not known to me. I let her go. She was far too strong for me to handle. The one that was draining the life from me tried to run away into the real world but....he was still bound to me...so I pulled him back. After that, I destryed him...and I woke up. That’s all I know.”
Purist was disapointed. Azwraith and Furion on the other hand, looked intrigued. Two new great forces? Even though one is destroyed, the other one remains. They both wondered how come they didn’t notice their apearance? How come they didn’t see them when they came up on the stage?
“This serious.” Spoke Furion “Are you sure that you destroyed the one that attacked you?”
“I...I do not know.” Muttered Zeus slowly “He might still be....he gave in without a fight...that probably means he had some sort of an escape plan. I know I would have.”
“This is indeed a grave matter.” Said Azwraith “Something must be done about this. If not...we might get ambushed by two powerfull scourge champions that we never met before. And then...” He powed his head, and crosed his arms on his chest. He was trying to feel something.
Furion looked the same, with his head and hands on the tip of his staff which was stabbed into the ground.
“I found it!” they both shouted at the same moment.
“It is there. A dark force. Not so strong but...” started Azwraith, and Furion continued “But it was very strong once...when the world was still young.” He stoped here. Azwraith resumed “But I didn’t feel it directly...rather indirectly through someone else....” Furion cut him short “I think it was Mortred. Yes, I fealth that force through Mortred. It certanly must be the being that is corupting her, poisoning her mind. There might still be hope for her.”
“But I still wonder who was the other one. The one draining the life from Zeus.” Said the Phantom Lancer “I think he might still be alive, but hiding...somewhere. Maybe he only lost his corporeal form in the battle with Zeus?”
“Possible.” Said Furion “But a soul cannot survive withouth a body, atleast an incorporeal one. But if his body was destroyed...how could he surivive? Its not easy to psosess another body, and even if he was avle for that...he was still in some nothingness as Zeus said.”
“But if he had some conection to someone in this world...he could ocupy his body, could he not?”
“But 2 souls cannot inhabit one body for a long time. It is not posible for more than...one day at the most, but possibly less.”
“Yes, that is true. But I do not know...maybe...he could ocupy another body withouth a soul. That’s the only way.” Said Azwraith. He had his doubts about who might be the one that attacked Zeus. But he kept it for himself. Like many other things.
“There are not much soulless bodies just lying around...” said Furion and then a thought crossed his mind. All fell into place “I am so stupid!” he shouted “I know what is happening. How didn’t I see it earlier! Goddamit!” he spoke a few words, and disapeared with a little flash.
Everyone was in a daze, suprised by this. It was something unexpected, even by Furion himself.
“He could have atleast told us what is it before he left.” Said Purist still suprised by Furions sudden departure.
“I can tell you too, but unfortunatly I left as well some time ago.” Said Azwraith. Purist and Zeus just gazed into him for a few moments. Then, Azwraiths illusion dissapeared, and the previous sentence was clear. He left even before Furion did.
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“So, tell me old man” said Terrorblade to the creature that currently dwelved inside his mind “why did your plan fail? I thought you said you never fail?” he smiled.
“Who says it failed?” said Rotund’jere
“Drop the act. I know you failed. Double. You are good at cutting your thoughts away from me, but I can still tell this isnt what you planed. You failed.”
“Don’t mock me boy.” The Necrolyte said coldly “Indeed I failed, but not completely. I always have another plan. You know that. I never exclude any options, even my own failure.”
“So? What are you planing now?”
“Do you realy think I am going to say that to you?” while he spoke this he was trying hard not to reveale his thoughts to Terrorblade who, on the other hand, tried to penetrate his defenses. The subconcious battle continued.
“I have the right to know, don’t I?”
“No. You wil ldo what I say, or I will just stay in your body and use all my magic forces at once. That will not onlykill you, but also destroy your soul.”
Terrorblade stoped trying to penetrate into Rotund’jeres mind. This might be a bluf, but on the other hand its best not to risk it.
“Anyway,” continued Rotund’jere “you wil lfind out what my plans are soon enough.”
Terrorblade was not relived at all. He feared for his life, for his soul. Rotund’jere is someone who doesn’t care about anyone other than himself. Not even a little. Terrorblade knew him too well to trust him.
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Lanaya suddenly stoped, and kneeled. Shendelzare swiftly ran to her, afraid that something has happened to her.
“I’m fine.” Said Lanaya, like she was reading her mind. And maybe she did?
“Why did you stop?” asked Shendelzare in discontent. Lanaya never told her anything. She was too mysterious.
“Its nothing. Lets continue.” Said Lanaya as she stood up. Shendelzare raged once again, but Lanaya wispered “Now its not the time to be angry. Its not a good time at all. Just folow me, and act normaly.”
Shendelazre decided to listen to her, even though angrew brewed in her, ready to burst out any second now.
After a few minutes, Lanaya sudenly stoped, and kicked the air left of her. Shendelzare gasped her breath,ready to face the enemy. But there was none. She just stood silently, as Lanaya continued to fight with air.
“Shendelzare!” shouted Lanaya “Hit him!”
“Who?”
“Just do it!”
The Vengfull spirit moved her hand, and swinged the broken chakram. A bolt of flashing white light flew from her weapon in a straight line. Lanaya made a move with her hand and it changed course, hiting...something, that stood beside her. She moved swiftly dispatching the unseen thing with a kick combo. Shendelzare heard when it fel to the ground, got up, and swiftly ran away.
“What...what was it?” barely spoke Shendelzare. She still wasn’t completely sure what happened.
“This...creature, flowed us ever since we left the Sentinel camp. I do not know what it was. But it intended to kill us, or atleast you. I fealt him, and the surface of his mind, the moment he started folowing us. When I fealt it was the right time, I striked by feeling. I didn’t know where he actualy was, but I managed to land a few hits, and lead your magic bolt onto him. He wont return anymore I think.”
“Who do you think it was? Was it someone from the Scourge or was it...the traitor?” Shendelzare now feared gravely that it indeed was rikimaru. Noone else on the Sentinels had that kind of ability.
“I..do not know.” Spoke Lanaya “But it wasn’t undead, I can tell that. So we can exclude Clinkz, and it certanly wasn’t Anoob’arak, he knows better than to try to sneak up on me. He made that mistake once, he wont do it again.”
“So...that leaves only one option. It was the traitor.”
“Although I hate to admit it...it probably was.”
They stood for a moment, both carefully contemplating their next move.
“We should continue our search for Ulfsaar.” Finaly said Shendelzare.
Lanaya just noded, and continued to walk with Shendelzare folowing her. After a while she started running, and so did the Vengfull spirit withouth asking any questions.
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wah!?!?!
rikimaru's a traitor!!!!
BOO-HOO
poor rikimaru...
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earth stony wrote:
wah!?!?!
rikimaru's a traitor!!!!
BOO-HOO
poor rikimaru...
wah!?!?!
rikimaru's a traitor!!!!
BOO-HOO
poor rikimaru...
Are you sure its him? ^^
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Well, it's either Rikimaru, or Gondar
(I hope you can surprise us).
The chapter was good, I dunno what else to say.
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it could be any hero who can go invis really
and i think i know who it is, but im not telling until it is revelaed alter
but anyways, great chapter! keep going!
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i have a good guess too! hmm...
the traitor is....
hehe
hehe, go chapter 11! make it soon as possible!
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