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Shadow of Vengance (Chapter 13 - Take care its a long one)
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Should I continue with this?
No ending time set.
Hell no! 21% [ 18 ]
Hell yeah! 78% [ 66 ]
woooo suspense.
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Come on man, update..it's been more than ten days!
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My comedy fanfic-A Dota Story(On Chapter 11 atm!!)
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Iworte the 11th crapter but my comps screen died yesterday...so I'm stuck in a fcuking internet cafe. Damn. I hope I get to post the next part soon....
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Thanks for the sig Thundercracker. (I edited it a little) ^^
Shadow of Vengance - chapter 13 I uploaded. If to check it out you want, click on my sig you will.^_^
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FIX UR COMP'S SCREEN! ASAFP!
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i know its the invisible hero xD
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Better to Die then to Fade Away....
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We should make a vid of one of ur episode...Last Episode maybe?
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TFS your a GOD of GIF
Infinite in mystery
is the gift of the goddess
We seek it thus and take it to the sky
Ripples form on the water's surface
The wandering soul knows no rest
"LOVELESS" Act 1
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This sooooooo amazing fanfic..
PLease continue it..
pleaseeeee.....
I want 2 see how Roshan killed by fuzziwuzzy..
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Finally, Thanks to reiva00 for this!!
"God, I want her to be happy, no matter whatever it means..."
"God, I want her to get all the love she deserved from me..."
"God, I want her to find someone who will look at her all the times, as I do now..."
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Great story, smart and very cunning, maybe add some wit to make it a great balanced and all round product. The highlight so far has been the way you create suspense and create cusriosity for your readers.
You are a very good writer and I hope you keep this up.
PS: Take your time finishing the story (if you are anywhere near doing so yet). A good story often gets screwed up by a hasty ending. As much detail as possible.
PSS: In other words, just keep doing what you are doing xD
Very good and gripping.
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Well, my comps back up, but only temporarily, I still ahve some problems. But I am glad I can finaly release chapter 11 of my fan-fic! And for those who havent read any of the parts yet, I will post a download of a pdf version of the fan-fic.
So, heres chapter 11....
Corpses of Sentinels solders layed around the camp, mutilated, their armors and robes stained with blood, sometimes with their limbs seperated from their carcases. Pieces of treants were also to be found amongst the bloody bodies of humans, night elves and trolls. The forest was silent, like it mourned the many deaths that ocured in this place. An eagle, silent and undisturved, circled over the field of death. Suddenly, a sound of footsteps came from the forest, and soon, Rexxar emerged thicketh. The eagle screached. The Beastmastr closed his eyes and stood before the battlefield, honoring the dead. He watched them die throught the eyes of his eagle, unable to do anything. He rushed to the camp as fast as he could, but alas, he was not fast enough to stop the carange. The eagle landed on his shoulder.
“It’s not your fault.” he told him
“I know.” He replied “But still cannot belive that I was not fast enough to stop....this masacre. It hurts my soul to know that I was powerless, unable to do anything.” He sighed “They shall be revenged.” He used one of his axes to cut the palm of his left hand “I swear it upon my blood, the blood of Mok’Nathal.” He kneeled and after a moment of silence he stood up again.
“I think Furion, or atleast someone else of the leaders from the main camp should know about this.” Said the eagle “The two shadows took something from here. A shiny thing. I did not see what it was.”
“Hm....” Rexxar thought for a moment “I do not know what it was. I saw it too, through your eyes, but I do not know what it was either. But someone must know what was guarded in this camp.”
Suddenly, a faint voice came from a pile of bodies and a knight, covered in blood, barely stood up, gasping, barely breathing. But still alive. Rexxar rushed to his side, and cought him right before the knight colapsed.
Rexxar put him on the ground gently, so that he is lying on his back, and then took out a bottle from a sack on his belt.
“Drink this.” The man tried to opose, but he was too weak to do anything “It will heal you.” The Beastmaster said, and removed the part of the knights hemet that was covering his mouth, than poured the strange greenish water into his mouth. He noticed that the man had, not theeth, but fangs, and that his breath was extremly hot. Rexxar almost burned his hand while pouring the liquid into the knights mouth.
Rexxar spent that night trying to heal the knights wounds. He fainted not short after the Rexxar gave him the healing water, and he has had a fevor ever since. The Beast Master knew his potions and herbs very well, but the wounds the knight had were too heavy for him to still be alive. He should have died long ago. But yet, he is still alive. His body was covered in strange red tatoos, Rexxar noted as he took of the knights armor, and his body temperature was extremly high, more than double than a normal human. He suspected it is heightened because of the fevor, but it still would be higher than normal even ifhe was healthy. Soon, Rexxar saw that most of his herbs had no effect on the man whatsoever, while some, that were used only as an aditions to some others, proved extremly effective. Like this human...was not human at all.
After a restlless night for Rexxar, at dawn, the knight woke up. At first he looked desoriented and lost, then he stood up with ease. His left leg was broken, but now, it seamed fine. Rexxar knew now, that this was no human.
“Where am I?” the knight asked “Who are you? What happened?”
“You are at the same place where I found you.” Rexxar replied ‘My name is Rexxar. And what happened is, that your outpost got attacked by...some creatures. Shadows. Unknown to me. Two of them.I rushed here to help...but I was too late.”
In a flash of merciless and sudden awarness, the knight remembered everything, the battle, the defeat, death and blood, screams of agony. After the initial shock, he put himslef together and started xplaining everything to Rexxar.
“Indeed, we got attacked.” He begun “Two shadows....yes those were two shadows. One unseed, but still corporeal, while the other one walked through trees and men like a ghost, put struck like something far more real.” He sighed “We got attacked when we least expected it. We were drinking that night, and we fell asleap just a few hours before the attack. All my soldiers, and myself were still half-drunk when the attack woke us up. We stood no chance against their swift chakrams. Its like they were everywhere. But the truth is, there were only two. My men fell like leaves in autumn. All efforts were avail. When they attacked me, I stood no chance either. I tried, but it was not nearly enough. Hundreds of wounds were made on me in a matter of minutes. I fell, but I did not die. I watched helplessly as my men got slauthered, one after another. I thought i was going to die too. And the only thing that came to my mind when I fainted, is that I would die, leaving my mens deaths unavenged. That I failed, and that I would never be able to redeem for it. But, thanks to you, I will have that chance.”
Rexxar was silent for a moment, absorbing the information.
“You still havent told me your name.” he finaly said
“Davion is my name.” the knight said “But I am also Arc Honist, if you know me by that name.” he paused “But most know me only by my title – The Dragon Knight.”
Rexxar now finaly knew who the knight was. The notorious survivor, half-human half –dragon warrior, suposably unkillable. He heard stories of how enemies eben split open his chest and he kept on fighting. A story about how he was impaled through his whole body by an earthen spike, and left for dead, but reapeared 3 days later withouth a scrach. So this is the fabled Dragon Knight.
“I am glad to meat you. I have heard of you before. Your reputation is....legendary.”
“I have heard of you too Rexxar of the Mok’Nathal.” Davion said “But now there is no time to get aquinted. We were guarding something at this camp, a wepon of great powers, that could not be moved. If they took it...”
“They did.” Immediately said Rexxar “I saw they took something through my eagles eyes. Something...that shined with a blindidng yellow light.”
“Yes that is it. The weapon. We must tell Furion about this immediately.” He said “If that weapon falls into the wrong hands....who knows wht could happen.”
“Wait.” Said Rexxar, quriously “What is that weapon?”
“I am sure you have heard of it.” Said Davion “It is known by many names, but the most famus one its known by is....The Radiance.”
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Shendelzare and Lanaya finaly reached a small furbolg hut in the woods. It seamed aboandoned, with vines already covering it from all sides.
“Do you think ulfsaar is here?” asked Shendelzare, and she already knew the answer.
“No.” Lanaya said just what Shendelzare expected “But he lived here nto long ago. I think he left enough of his presence here for me to sense where he is. If not....than I guess we wont find him any time soon.”
“So...you are saying this is basicly our only chance of finding him at all?”
“Yes” Lanaya was straightforward as usual. She then aproached the hut, and entered it. It was dark and moist inside. A few pairs of red eyes watched Shendelzare and Lanaya from a conrner and soon disapeared. The templar asaassin looked around the empty hut, trying to grasp the leftovers of Ulfsaars presence. They were weak but still present. She sensed the imenense rage that filed the whole hut. Ulfsaar left enraged, with a killing intent so strong that it was still hanging in the air. Shendelzare felt it too, although she could not tell what it actualy was.
“He left here about a month ago.” Lanaya said “The only emotion left here of him is rage. Its so...overwhelming.” she paused ‘I can sense where he is but...his rage is os great that it covers a large area. I cannot exactly locate him because of that. But I know aproximatly where he is.”
“Where?” asked Shendelzare
“Suprisingly,” said Lanaya “not too far from Roshans lair.”
They looked at eachother
“We should hurry.” Said Shendelzare
“Definitly.”
And they ran off like the wind.
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Having a being like Rotund’jere in your head is not quite a plesant experience. Terrorblade hated every god damn minute of it. But he knew he had to endure it, cause in the end, he would rather keep that blasted freak in his head for some time, than die. There was never any doubt in the fact that, what Rotund’jere says, is what he is going to do. He didn’t even atemp to talk to Rotund’jere – there was no use – the spirit of death would tell him nothing relebent at all. So, he continued his march towoards Roshan’s lair.
“So, Terrorblade,” Rotund’jere suddenly spoke to him “do you actualy know what the Eye of Skadi is?”
“No I do not,” replyed Terrorblade “and I do not have any desire whatsoever to find out.”
“You see,” continued Rotund’jere, paying no mind to Terrorblades remark “its actualy a piece of the Frozen Throne itself. A very powerfull artefact. It actualy freezes anyone attacked by the user of it, while granting its user heghtend senses, greater wisdom, and more brute strenght. But there is more.” He paused signifiacntly, and Terrorblade roled his eyes. Rotund’jere always did that “You see, being a piece of the Frozen Throne doesn’t only mean that it holds the power of the Lich King in it. It IS the Lich King.” Terrorblades eyes widened. This was something else. Something he could use to his advantage. “Not truly the Lich King, but it’s a piece of him, connected to the whole that is the Frozen Throne. Somehow, a piece of the Lich Kings soul is in the Eye of Skadi, and still connected to his whole soul. Does this make you realise why he sent you to Roshans Lair? And why he gave you the Eye of Skadi?”
Terrorblade was hit by a sudden revelation. It was all clear as day. Atleast the thing he saw from his side of the battle.
“Yes,” said Rotund’jere feeling that Terrorblade realiesd the Lich Kings intentions. “it is so. And you must not let it happen. You know that don’t you? If that happenes, that would end this battle.”
“So what? Our side would win in that case.”
‘”OUR side? No my dear boy. Our side would LOSE. The Lich King would win.”
“What are you saying? We are not with the Sentinels!”
“Did I say that?” Rotund’jere laughed at Terrorblades lack of understaning for what he was trying to say to him “Our side is naither the Scourge, nor the Sentinels. Our side, is our side. We. Wouldn’t you rather be the one to stand at my side when I destroy the Lich King and crush the Sentinels like tiny bugs? Or the one to stand below the Lich Kings feet when he wins?”
Terrorblade finaly understood.
“Look at whats best for you boy. In this world, the only person who you can realy trust is yourself, so trust noone else, and work only for your own best interest. Forget the ideals of old times. Be a hipocrit, a liar, a thief, a cheater, be anything that you must be to rise to the top. That is the ONLY way you can be something. Don’t bow to others, but make others bow you.”
“Why are you telling me all this? Is there any purpose? You did not want to talk to me only a moment ago, but now, you are giving me advices? Do you think I am supposed to continue what you started if you die now? If that is so...” he hesitated for a moment, but he decided to keep his stand “I decline. I will not become like you. Never. I play by the rules. I will do what i swore to do. I always will. I will never betray anyone who I swore my alegance to.”
“Fool! Honour, Courge, Noblness, Eternal Love, noone belives in those things anymore! Those ideals of the old are dead for ages! And you still belive in them?!”
“Yes.” Said Terrorblade withouth hesitation “Not because those ideals are real, but because they are worth beliving in. And I think you will never understand that. A foul being like you, so lusfull for power, more than anything else....no you will never understand.”
“SHUT UP!” shouted Rotund’jere, and Terrorblade though, for a moment, that his head will split in two. So forcefull was the rage of the Necrolyte.
“Continue towoards your destination. Do what i say, and I will release you. If you defy me one more time, I will do it. I will kill both myself and you. I do not care. I realy do not care anymore. I have had enough.”
And so, he continued. A few minutes later, he saw the dark place that was the home of the most powerfull giant, deemed invincible, Roshan the Immortal One.
So far only that much. Heres the download link - Shadow of Vengance
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Thanks for the sig Thundercracker. (I edited it a little) ^^
Shadow of Vengance - chapter 13 I uploaded. If to check it out you want, click on my sig you will.^_^
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My guess is that the traitor is Gondar. After all, he is a bounty hunter, he could switch sides if he wanted to, or if the Lich King gave him a very good price....... lol
We want more of it!!! Keep it up
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EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love how they, as in VS and TA + TB and Nec, might meet up ^^
DK FTW!
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Wow..
Great story..
Like part when DK and rexx meet..
So cool!
Continue this!
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Finally, Thanks to reiva00 for this!!
"God, I want her to be happy, no matter whatever it means..."
"God, I want her to get all the love she deserved from me..."
"God, I want her to find someone who will look at her all the times, as I do now..."
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