Total Votes: 33

Should I continue with this?

No ending time set.
Hell yeah! 78% [ 26 ]

Hell no! 21% [ 7 ]

TheGunslinger

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Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:50 pm

I'm planing on mixing a few stories here, liek side stories, bu keeping the main focus on Veng and Mort.

Thx for reading btw ^^
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jpaulusmr

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Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:10 pm

pls continue
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940108

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Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:51 pm

wooo....a nice story great job !!!
at first it was shendelzare and mortred now changed to magina.... Confused

but still it was good Very Happy

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jimboh

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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 10:50 am

Nice story, though Elune is a "she" man Smile

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Keep it up, ofc.
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Tee

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T-T

Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 11:01 am

You could do with some English and Grammar Lessons.

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DarkSlayer_14

Warnings : 1

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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 11:41 am

CONTINUE IT!!!^^
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earth stony

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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 12:31 pm

lots of misspelling tot... but nic story!
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jimboh

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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 12:39 pm

Tee wrote:
You could do with some English and Grammar Lessons.

And you could do with some kindness...
The guy has put an effort on this and it's very good.
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TheGunslinger

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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 12:53 pm

Tee wrote:
You could do with some English and Grammar Lessons.

Well...my keyboard is shit, and it tends to randomly type letters that it isnt supposed to. Like, I press W and it types L and that sort of thing...I realy gotta replace it...

And for the gramar...i tend to write hasty....also, not many people in my country know english, and I learned it completly by myself at the age of 8 ^^. So you could apreciate that I know english.

jimboh wrote:
Nice story, though Elune is a "she" man Smile

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Keep it up, ofc.

Yeah...I kind of forgot. I will corect that....I remembered just yesterday when I started writing part 3 ^^
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zimbabwerocks@yahoo.com

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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 12:56 pm

uhmmm isnt it that elunes a Woman???

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TheGunslinger

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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 1:25 pm

zimbabwerocks@yahoo.com wrote:
uhmmm isnt it that elunes a Woman???

My above post ^^ It s explained there

Anyway, please point out the part where i refered to ELune as male so I can fix it
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meteorstorm0109

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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 2:03 pm

it's so cool!!!!
continue plz...

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[piG]Jenan

Warnings : 3

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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 2:43 pm

good job!
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kathplar

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Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 3:12 pm

You should edit the typos. Overall it was good. ^_^

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KingV

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Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 6:58 am

U managed to capture my attention with this story. Nice work. just a lil' observation : put more detail in the fighting sequences or make then a little longer Very Happy

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Shadow of Vengance (Revived, chapter 3)

Total Votes: 33

Should I continue with this?

T-T

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