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Shadow of Vengance (Chapter 13 - Take care its a long one)
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Should I continue with this?
No ending time set.
Hell no! 21% [ 18 ]
Hell yeah! 78% [ 66 ]
btw, where is serbia??
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Its in Europe:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Serbia
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ohh i see.. tnx
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Yes, its the totaly irrelevant little orange dot in the picture ^^
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Waaaah.....I finsihed chapter 9. It took me some time but I made it! Enjoy...if you can...
In the emptiness of the mid-space, Mercurial fealt the Necrolyte’s power, she felt him channeling his spell. It was indeed a tremendous one. The spell known as Twist of Fate , one of the higher rank spells from the Necromicion. Using it, you can drain the life from someone, and when the victim dies, you obitain its full powers. But you must hurt him with a wepon this spell is bound to. Usualy, arrows, glaives and throwing daggers are used for this, but Rotund’jere wasnt able to use those wepons. So he used Mortred for his dirty work, intending for her to get killed in the process, thus making absorbing Mortreds soul and powers in the crystal he gave her, along with Mercurials powers.. Clever of him. But with the help of the mysterious traitor the Spectre found this out in time. She didn’t know how a Sentinel warrior could know such a thing, but it proved right, so it didn’t matter. She continued through the nowhere, towoards the Necrolyte.
Suddenly, a new power apeared. It was familiar to the Spectre. And then she remembered. It was Zeus. She penicked for a moment. Zeus was degraded, his powers in the mortal realm were lesser ones, his godly essence contained in a fragile body that limited his powers. In the nowhere, the mid-space, as a pure soul, withouth a body, he had his godly powers. She didn’t know what to do. She cannot face a god of thunder at his full power, unbound by anything.
Then she remembered what she actualy was. She was older than him. Heck, she was older than Sargeras the dark titan. She was as old as this world. And here, she is also unbound. Here, Zeus is nothing to her, even in his full power. She laughed at herself in that moment, and continued towoards the Necrolyte.
She managed to reach him, a bit earlier than Zeus. She was on time, but barely. The spell was almost finished, and Rotund’jere was finishing the last incantation when the full power of the Spectre came down on him, stoping his chaneling, leaveing the spell unfinished, but still lingering in the empty space around them.
“You!” shouted Rotund’jere “How did you get here!”
“I am the darkness from the beginig of existence, and this is the place I have lingered in for millenias through which I was nothing in this or the physical world. But now, here, I am God.” Spoke the Spectre fearlessly “Here, I can do anything. You are but a worm under my feet.”
“You think you stoped me? Think again.” Said the Necrolyte “I can leave this realm in any time.”
“No, you cannot”
“Just watch me.” He said as he faded away from the mid-space. And then, he reapeared .“How…how did you stop me?” he mumbled
“I didn’t. Suprisingly, I even couldn’t, but someone else stoped you instead.” Mercurial spoke “And I think I know who did.”
“I did.” Spoke Zeus, with a voice made out of the thunders roar, and the lightnings crack, shaking the reality of the mid-space.
In a moment of revelation, Rotund’jere realised his mistake. He made himself able to exist in mid space and the real world at the same time, so he could shift between the two, withouth anyone stoping him. But now, he was bound to Zeus by his own spell. And so, the thunder god was able to pull Rotund’jere into the realm in which Zeus himself was currenly. Thus, the Necrolyte was unable to escape. He stagered in fear. For the first time since his death, he was in danger of being anhilated.
“You can go, whaatever you are shadow, I let you go.” Said Zeus “As for him….he shall pay.”
Mercurial though for a moment, and then decided that its best to let Zeus destroy the Necrolyte, rather than her. Thus, she will not revel her existence and powers to the Sentinels, while her main competition will still be removed. She just noded, and disapeared from the mid-space, leaving Zeus and Rotund’jere alone.
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Mortred was surprised, as Mercurial suddenly apeared beside her.
“What happened?” she instantly asked
“Someone else will take care of him.” Replyed Mercurial “Do not vorry, he will certanly be destoryed. We do not need to be afraid of him anymore.”
“Are you sure?” asked Mortred in disbelif “He could still survive.”
“The chances are minimal. So minimal that they are negligable. Do not vorry about that. Its all sorted out. We should focus on other things now.”
“Like getting…..that artifact.” Mortred almost said what she shouldn’t have, but she tied her tounge at the right moment.
“Yes.” Agreed Mercurial “That is a priority now. You remember our plan?”
“Yes. It should be simple enough. They are certanly in confusion because of what is happening ot Zeus. Rontund’jere provided us distraction, and he doesn’t even know it. We couldn’t do what we planed if he didnt try to carry out his plan.”
“That is ironical.” Agreed Mercurial, laughing in her mind at the thought of Rotund’jere currently getting destroyed by the thunder god, not even aware of the fact that his foolish actions will lead to her triumph. The tides turn in an unpredictable way with every moment.
“We should get going. Zeus will wake soon, and we must not lose precious time.” Said Mercurial while fading into the shadows, instantly folowed by Mortred
What the Spectre forgot is, that the tides will not always turn in her favour...
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Purist used his magic on Furion repetedly, trying to heal his wounds that were more mental than physical, while Azwraith walked around in circles. Lanaya was sitting on the ground, meditating, and Shendelzare was tending for Zeus, who was still in a coma, but was no longer sweting or mumbling.
“I do not know what more to do.” Said Purist in Desperation “I did my best and nothing. He cannot be healed by my magic. His mind is the one that’s wounded, not his body. And I’m helpless in this matter.”
“Fortunatly, I am not.” Said Lanaya as she stood up from the ground, breathing heavily “Stand back.” She pushed Purist away from Furion, and kneeled beside the Prophet. She took of her gloves, and reveald her hands, shining with purple light. Rising them into above her head, she started chanting, and the light emenating from her hands grew brighter with each word she spoke. Everyone directed their gaze at her.
“What the hell is she doing...” spoke Purist. He intended to stop her. He didn’t trust her, and he suspected that se might be trying to kill Furion.
Just a moment before he acted, Azwraith stoped him. “Lanaya is trying her best to help him. Trust in her. Trust in someone for once in your life.” Spoke the Phantom Lancer with a voice powerfull and convincing. Purist backed down.
Lanaya spoke the finishing word of the mantra nad layed her hands on Furion. A blinding flash of Purple light, and Furion suddenly looked like a he was made out of that light, his whole body consumed by it. And then, Furion opened his eyes, and suddenly breathed in. The light faded away, and Lanaya fell to the ground, still awake, but heavily exausted from the spell.
Furion stood up from the ground using his staff in his right hand, his left hand grasping his forhead. His skull fealt like it was ready to crack open any minute. For a few moments he strugled to remember what happened, and then it came to him.
“What happened?” he asked, since he couldn’t remember anything after teleporting into the Sentinels base. To his surprise, everyone just stared at him.
“You just telportred here and fainted.” Finally spoke Shendelzare “Purist tried to heal you, but he was unable. Lanaya steped in a managed to do what Purist failed at.” The last sentence made Purist groan a bit. “Anyway, we need you to look at Zeus. He is not getting any worse, but not better either.”
“What is worng with him?” Furion instantly shook off the headache and the dissiness.
“His life is being drained away by a chaneling spell from a great distance. If you could track the caster...”
“I can. Step aside.” Said Furion and touched Zeuses head. He instantly fealt that Zeus was no longer in his body. He was stil lbound to the one that was chaneling the spell, but the spell was no longer chaneled. Both Zeus and the oen that tried to kil lhim were not in this world. But it seamed that Zeus was giving the enemy a living hell right now.
“He will be okay.” Said Furion “He is no longer in mortal danger and he will be waking soon.” He paused “I hope. Theres actualy nothing I can do about that. He wont die, that’s for sure but....I do not know will he find his way back to this world fro mwhere he is now. We can only wait...”
Azwraith sighed and continued walking in circles, Purist just crosed his arms on his chest, and Shendelzare glared into Zeus and then into Furion.
Lanaya sat on the ground, trying to recover. She knew what happened just now, but she didn’t tell, and had no intention to do so. Her reasons were only her own. Furion sat beside Zeus, and closed his eyes.
And thus, they waited.
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Balanar advanced towoards Chen,who just stood still, waiting for the demon of the night to apear. They were both very aware of the enemies abilities and weaknesses. Balanar ran faster than anyone, draining the power from the night, advanicing towoards Chen, with an intention to kill him with one speed powered blow. He will not fall pray to that old mans magic once again, that’s for sure. Chen, on the other hand, just waited calmly for Balanar to arive. He knew that the night demon was too hasty, not only in his movments but also in his actions which proved to be his demise multiple times. He meant to exploit that once again. He raised his cane and waited.
The next moment, Balanar apeared out of the dark forest, and Chen had only a moment to act. That moment proved enough. The Pentience spell hit its target, and Balanar found hiself deprived of his speed. But nonetheless he continued with his attack. Chen ordered his wolf to move and he easily evaded Balanars attack. The next thing that came at the Night Stalker was a blinding flash of light, which hurt his body, and his sinfull soul through the spell of Pentience. He kneeled, gasping for his breath.
Chen unmounted himself from his wolf, and ordered him to go away. For now, he wants to face Balanar alone.
“So, Balanar, you fall once again.” Said Chen “You were always too fast for your own good.”
Balanar smiled. As much as he hated this pesky old man, he had to admit he was right. He has fallen pray to the same spells once again, only do to his own hastines in making a battle plan. Actualy, the lack of one. Simply rushing in at full speed into the enemy isn’t realy what you can call a plan.
“You are right old man. You get the better of me once again.” Said Balanar, still smiling. “But what you don’t know is that I have a new ace up my sleave.”
And as he said that, Balanar raised his hand ,and Chen suddenly found himself unable to speak, his breath cluched in his throath. He was unable to cast any spell withouth his voice. And Balanar knew that. The Night Stalker then suummoned the power of the Void, hurting Chen, and paralysing his body.
After that, the carnage started. The Holy Knight was blasted with a blindingly fast series of punches and kicks, which his old body could not handle very well. Bones craked and skin torn, blood gushed and screams of pain spread throughout the dark forest. It ended with Chen laying broken on the ground ,while Balanar kicked him.
After a while, he stoped kicking the broken Holy Knight and leaned over his mutalated body “Beg for mercy old man ,and I might spare you.” Said Balanar with an evil grin. He had no intention of sparing Chen, but it would be fun seeing hem beg for mercy.
“Never....will I... lose my dignity... to the likes... of you...” barely spoke Chen. He then spited blood onto Balanars face, with a smile on his face.
Balanar groaned. He has broken the old mans body, but not his spirit. He still didn’t fear him. And everyone should fear the Hunter in the Night such as him. He resumed his onslaught on Chen, raging at the only one who dared defy him in such a dispicable way. Chen still smiled, making Balanr even more angry for not being able to whipe that smile off his face.
Suddenly, Balanars movments slowed, as the first rays of sunlight started apearing. Chen knew it was now or never.
A net flew at Balanar traping him, while a centaur aproached him and stomped him. Chen whispered something and a ray of light shined upon him, healign his wounds, not completely, but enough. He raised from the ground, picked up his cane, and used his spells on Balanar who fell to the ground, screaming in pain. He was tricked once again. How could it be? He managed to cut the net open with his claws, but then another flew at him. Two Dark Trolls apeared and started hiting him. Chens folowers. The centaur stomped him once again, breaking his strain of thoughts.
“I will not ask you to beg for mercy,” Said Chen “for I can have no mercy on you.”
And just as Balanar thought this is the end, time stoped. Literaly.
Darkterror cam closer, and took Balanar out of the Chronosphere he had created. His eyes were blank, but Balanar knew he was angry. Not Darkterror himself, but the Lich King who watched through the eyes of the Faceless Void.
“i know, I messed up.” He said “It wont happen again.” but no response came.
Then, the Night Stalker barely stood up and folowed Darkterror back to the Scourge base.
A few seconds after they left, the Chronosphere expired. Chen was, at first, suprised by Balanr not being there, and then when he saw the sun was muxh higher in the sky than a moment ago, he knew what has happened. Darkterror stoped time. The reched being foiled him. Chen quickly called his wolf and mounted him, ordering him to carry him to the Sentinels base as fast as possible. And then he fainted.
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“Furion,” said Shendelzare “what happened? Where were you?”
“I was at the Scourge side, and I got caught by Atropos.”
Replyed Furion, not too porud of admiting that. It was foolish to do so in any case.
“Alone?” asked Shendelzare. Furion noded “But....why? And how did you escape Atropos?”
“I was folowing someone. Someone from the Sentinels, but I lost him. And Atropos caught me off guard. Luckily, I was saved by Chen, who stayed on the Scourge side to fight Balanar. I hope he is still alive...” Furion sighed in distress.
“Who were you folowing Furion?”
“Rikimaru.” He said “You see Shendelzare, in the last few weeks, all our actions have been somehow predicted, and prefectly countered by the Scourge. So, I suspected of a traitor in our ranks, and, when I saw Rikimaru heading to the Scourge side alone, I decided to folow him. He went invisible somewhere alnog the way, and I wasn’t able to even track his energy anymore. I have a strong feeling he is the traitor. He could spy on us withouth us seeing him, and report it all to the Scourge withouth us even knowing he went there. He is the perfect spy. I do not know if its him, but theres a high posiblity that he is the one.”
Shendelzare thought about this for some time. A traitor in the ranks of the Sentinels? Rikimaru is perfect for that, just as Furion said. He could be spying on them even now. But she knew Rikimaru from before, and he was someone who valued honour above everything else, and hated the Scourge for corupting most of his kind.
“I know.” Suddenly said Furion “He is not the one who would betray us. But the fact remains that he is the main suspect.” He was reading her mind “Still, I will consider other options. But I will keep a close eye on him. And so should you.”
Shendelzare was tired of all this. But the fact remained that this is all nececary.
“Shendelzare.” Said Lanaya who suddenly apeared before her “We should go and find Ulfsaar, that’s what we came for.”
“Yes,” said Shendelzare as she stood up “we should find him now.” She looked at Furion, who noded in aproval. That was good enough for her.
As Lanaya and Shendelzare walked away from him, Furion remembered who Ulfsaar is, and he wondered if the two girls will be able to convice him to kill Roshan once again.
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Gj, Godlike chapter as usual.
A few typos though-vorry is worry and reched is actually spelt wretched.
Or is it your faulty keyboard again?
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Vorry is he keyboards fault, but retched is my own ^^
PS: Tell me where the typos are so I can fix them
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nce chapter..
don't vorry bout the typos, we understand..haha XD
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Typos are easily understandable...love this chapter alot...will wish this story never ends..
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That was a nice wall of text lol XD
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Flodian wrote:
That was a nice wall of text lol XD
That was a nice wall of text lol XD
XD LOL LMAO ROFL!
....No seriously, what do you think? I apreciate your oppinin (somewhat)
(PS: Somewhat = Only a little)
(PSS: Only a little = I do not care about it at all XD)
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Oh, I actually thought it was really nice. Lol My above comment was not sarcasm XD
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Oh, I actually thought it was really nice. Lol My above comment was not sarcasm XD
Oh, I actually thought it was really nice. Lol My above comment was not sarcasm XD
XD I know
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BTW gunslinger, do you have an ending in mind yet? lol
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Yes, actualy I do. I always write a story like this :
I make up the begining
I make up the ending (Changeable)
Then I make up everything in between as I go XD
Yes, I do have an ending in mind, but some other things must happen before it. This will go on for some time.
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