Envorrayelm - Soulmonger

Envorrayelm - Soulmonger

Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 5:10 pm

Envorrayelm - Soulmonger

Range: 500 | Move Speed: 290
Primary: INT
Str: 14 + 1.5 | Agi: 17 + 1.6 | Int: 23 + 2.4
Damage: 45 - 48 | HP: 416 | Mana: 299
HP Regen: 0.67 | Mana Regen: 0.93
Attack Speed: 1.45 | Armor: 2

Envorrayelm was considered just another undead servant until discovered by Kel`Thuzad during a Dark Ritual. He was to be sacrificed to restore power to The Lich. The Dark Ritual typically destroys its host in the process but for some reason Envorrayelm seemed to thrive under the stresses of the spell. Kel`Thuzad was surprised and angry that something so special had served as a footstool for so long. He demanded that Envorrayelm be tested to see how he could better serve the Lich King. It was discovered that Envorrayelm was in fact a “Soulmonger” capable of heal the allied and destroying the enemy! He now serves as a great mage answerable only to the Lich King himself.

Soul Nova (S)
transforms soulmongers life energy into a devastating missle, damaging targeted enemy unit. casting time 1 sec.
Level 1 - use 50 health to deal 100 damage
Level 2 - use 100 health to deal 150 damage
Level 3 - use 150 health to deal 200 damage
Level 4 - use 200 health to deal 250 damage
Mana Cost: 0
Cooldown: 15
Framework: he becomes red for a 1 second and fires red missile

Replenish (R)
Soulmonger uses health from nearby friendly units to heal if he is low on health.
Level 1 - heals if he have lower then 10% of his max hp
Level 2 - heals if he have lower then 15% of his max hp
Level 3 - heals if he have lower then 20% of his max hp
Level 4 - heals if he have lower then 25% of his max hp
Mana Cost: N/A
Cooldown: N/A
Framework: you can see red link between soulmonger and unit
Notes: he is healed only by one unit until that unit dies
Regen from Replenish is based on your hp regen.

Absorb Soul (A)
Sacrifices friendly unit and absorbs its soul, increasing soulmonger healt.
Level 1 - increasing healt by 10
Level 2 - increasing healt by 20
Level 3 - increasing healt by 30
Level 4 - increasing healt by 40
Mana Cost: 150
Cooldown: 30
Framework: unit that was hit dies and black soul go to air.
Notes: This is not a heal you get bonus hp from sacrifices friendly unit

Energy Tide (E)
Restores the health and skill charges to allies but he lose 50% of his max health.
Level 1 - restore allies in 100 aoe.
Level 2 - restore allies in 200 aoe.
Level 3 - restore allies in 300 aoe.
Mana Cost: 0
Cooldown: 120/100/80
Notes: you cant heal yourself or restore skill charges

Changes:
1.Regen from Replenish is based on your hp regen
2.Absorb Soul is not a heal you get bonus hp from sacrifices friendly unit
3.New story (story by getatmedog)

tnx for coments

Last edited by newclear on Fri Sep 05, 2008 9:40 pm; edited 3 times in total

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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 5:34 pm

Not a bad hero.. but.. you may want to think about upping his str and str gain.. 14+1.5 is extremly low, and since two of his skills use up his health, thats a huge limiter.. Also, his skill bonuses in total are pretty low, you may want to up them a tad. onto questions..
1) What is the point of making him an int hero when his only spell with a manacost is only 150?

2)What is the rate of heal of Replenish? How many HP/sec?

3)That's a really weak heal, especially with 150 mana and 30 cd, why so weak? Should you change it to % of HP that the dying unit has?

4)Correct me if I'm wrong but.. for 50% of your max hp, all allies within the AoE get fully healed, have all their mana replenished, and get a refresher orb effect?
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 6:56 pm

thanks for comment!!!

1. i put him to be int. and wanted somthin but that was unoriginal so he stay int. but skills get changed
2. that i must fix
3. that is not heal, you get bonus hp (more hp)
4. for 50% of Soulmonger max hp all allies within the AoE get fully healed and refresh ability cooldowns
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 8:19 pm

Ah, ic.. the third skill and low str stats make SO MUCH more sense now.. ty. Ult is pretty cool too, carry a bottle around to replenish your health, and then use ult to replenish you rteam after a team clash while you head back to fountain.

Will the replenish activate on neutral creeps as well? or only allied? If it worked on neutral, it would make him a great jungler xD
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Posted: Fri Aug 29, 2008 10:04 pm

only allied becouse he would be imba jungler xD
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Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 1:46 am

what is his kill strat. seriously. i mean is it beat the shit out of people... well i geuss that is the only way seeing that he has no nuke...

note: every hero can kill, even chen. he mobs em and then slows em and mobs them more :O so add in a nuke or something seriously. but a nice amount of healage power
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Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 11:26 am

Nice hero idea. Absorb Soul can make him an efficient tank if he keeps spamming it.

It's like this hero sacrifices his lifeforce for allies, then gets them in return. A cycle that will last from early to late game.

Just one question...
Is the regen from Replenish based on the ally's regen?
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Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2008 3:09 pm

Rewrite the hero story, sounds like an interesting idea, make a good story to go with it. Is he sent or scourge? Why is he fighting for one of the Ancients??
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Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 1:38 am

dude seriously!!! trust me healing doesn't make a good tank. trust me ive tried. Plz give him a kill strat plz!!! i swear. one nuke, jsut give me something
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Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 8:43 am

Now i just need a good story and he is finished!!!
Tnx for comments.
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Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 4:23 pm

If you need help with the story PM your revision to me and I will take a look for you.
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Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 7:09 am

i would advise u to pm him. he has some pretty good stories in his mind. its lik he's a writer lik charles dickins. lol. XD.
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Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 9:46 am

i know he make good story for him
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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 3:42 pm

Hahah.. thanks for boosting my moral! I have Mega Kill now! Sweeettt. Also, I think I now own the Dream heroes section. They should make me the mod for this department. What do you think? haha. jk.. But seriously, I think I have posted on everyone of these threads and am waiting for replies to most of them.
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Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2008 4:01 pm

If you posted on everyone of these threads and waiting for replies to most of them you should become king of dream hero forum ))
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