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should i focus on?

No ending time set.
BOTH (stay the same) 33% [ 1 ]
33%

FIRE 0% [ 0 ]
0%

WHO GIVES? (not me i just made her) 0% [ 0 ]
0%

DEATH 66% [ 2 ]
66%

ghost432


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Tezaya- the deathmancer (my first)

Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 12:12 pm

Tezaya - The Deathmancer
Range: 500 | Move Speed: 250
Primary: INT
Str: 15 + 0.5 | Agi: 18 + 1 | Int: 18 + 3
Damage: 45 - 50 | HP: 435 | Mana: 234
HP Regen: 0.7 | Mana Regen: 0.73
Attack Speed: 1.29 | Armor: 3

the picture icon i want her to have= http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource.php?t=85917

what i want her to look like=http://www.wizards.com/magic/
THEN go to planeswalkers and click on lilana vess


STORY

One day as she was walking along, through the wilderness, She discovered an orb, but not just an special orb. It was another version of Kil'Jaeden's orb, she soon learned that through the mystics of the orb she could summon more then just dreams and nightmares.
This then called upon some of Kil'Jaeden's nightmares and worst dreams.After a while of this beating Tezaya though she would try and fix everything her self...
BAD MISTAKE, and things progressed from bad to worse,as the nightmares started to slowly interwine with her conection to the emerald dream. Soon just as Illidan and the blood elves fell she went down into the pit of dispair created by the evil spirits Kil'Jaeden had trapped in there along with his own bloody soul.
Soon she had been taken over by the dark spirits and killed her first night elf, then her second and continuing at a super speed pace. It wasn't till she killed everyone in the village that she noticed she was behind it.
She quickly fleed the village knowing as soon as the next band of merchants came they would either fall under her will or escape and tell of her slaughter, which for hardly any of the bodies had been buried and where lying right where she had left them.
(cannot be stuffed doing more atm, might come back and finish this later)

SKILLS!!!

Wraith Fire ()
icon at
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource.php?t=96544&prev=t%3D14%26r%3D20%26d%3Dlist%26status%3Dg%26page%3D3
blasts a nearby enemies with fire called from the nether realm
Level 1 - has a 15% chance to deal 20-25 to all enemies nearby when a spell is cast/activated aoe 300
Level 2 - has a 25% chance to deal 45-50 to all enemies nearby when a spell is cast/activated aoe 350
Level 3 - has a 30% chance to deal 65-70 to all enemies nearby when a spell is cast/activated aoe 400
Level 4 - has a 35% chance to deal 100-120 to all enemies nearby when a spell is cast/activated aoe 450
passive
Mana Cost: 0
Cooldown: 0

Heat Vision ()
icon at
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource.php?t=93726&prev=t%3D14%26r%3D20%26d%3Dlist%26status%3Dg%26page%3D5
as she gets hotter and hotter, the deathmancer can grow into a flaming pit of dispair
Level 1 - burns all who get too close for 15 dam a sec. lasts 10 secs
Level 2 - burns all who get too close for 20 dam a sec. lasts 15 secs
Level 3 - burns all who get too close for 25 dam a sec. lasts 20 secs
Level 4 - burns all who get too close for 30 dam a sec. lasts 25 secs
immolation cept it last time not mana aoe 500
Mana Cost: 150
Cooldown: 30

Death Pact ()
icon at
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource.php?t=93968&prev=t%3D14%26r%3D20%26d%3Dlist%26status%3Dg%26page%3D5
through the orb she summons tendrils of corruption, which spike up through the ground. If it kills something the tendrils bring the corpse back as a skeleton which will fight for the Deathmancer.
Level 1 - spikes deal 75-100 damage and summon a tiny skeleton which has 200 hp and does 10-20 damage.
Level 2 - spikes deal 125-150 damage and summon a skeleton which has 250 hp and does 15-25 damage.
Level 3 - spikes deal 150-200 damage and summon a large skeleton which has 300 hp and does 25-40 damage
Level 4 - spikes deal 200-250 damage and summon a humungous skeleton which has 400hp and does 40-50 damage
is basically like burrow strike, cept instead Tesaya will stay above ground and instead having an effect simiar to Dirge's Raise dead skeles last 30 secs
Mana Cost: 250
Cooldown: 30

Motivation ()
icon at
http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/resource.php?t=89864&prev=t%3D14%26r%3D20%26d%3Dlist%26status%3Dg%26page%3D7
Tezaya through the orb "Motivates" an enemy into a rage, if the enemy is to die while in Motivation it will be passed along to another random enemy with the damage reset .
Level 1 - "Motivates" for 800 damage over 15 seconds.
Level 2 - "Motivates" for 850 damage over 12.5 seconds.
Level 3 - "Motivates" for 900 damage over 10 seconds.
Level 4 - "Motivates" for 1000 damage over 10 seconds.
(lvl 4 requires Gunisoo's Scythe of Vyse {stole this idea from Ghost, cus i like it Smile }
Mana Cost: 200/350/450/400
Cooldown: 180
TYVM to hive workshop for pictures
and to magic for making the planeswalkers[/img]


(changes... bumped up str gain from 0 - 0.5 {snigger} and agi down to +1 , changed motivation damage, i had typoed on heat vision and changed it back to 500 aoe, skeles from death pact now last 30 secs and 1st skill bumped up damage {what was i thinking?})

Last edited by ghost432 on Sun Sep 28, 2008 10:24 am; edited 1 time in total


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daneilster


Dominating Posts: 104 Joined: 13 Jun 2008 gold

Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 4:52 pm

no strength gain.....
movement speed way to little(look at heroes section...no heroes have 250 speed or even close)
1st skill a lil underpowered imo
what's the aoe of the 2nd skill?
3rd skill- how long does the skeleton last?
I don't get the ultimate...

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jimboh


Monster Kill Posts: 341 Joined: 08 Sep 2007 gold

Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2008 9:17 pm

:S.

First skill: Underpowered imho too. Buff it to 80 damage.
Second skill: Buff the AoE to 500. 200's just not enough for a ranged hero.
3rd skill: Nice for pushing, reduce the cooldown to 20 seconds.
Ulti: Nice idea. Buff the damage to 800-1000.
@ daneilster: 600 damage over 10 seconds, and if enemy dies by this ability, it jumps to a nearby opponent.

EDIT: I LoL'ed hard at the 0 str gain... LoL mate, ok, a hero shouldn't be imba, but you pulled it too far...
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mjs


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Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:50 am

needs more balance on the skills...
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getatmedog


Godlike Posts: 1356 Joined: 24 Jan 2008 gold

Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 6:20 pm

Hahaha.. 0 str gain. the ultimate paper hero.
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varunshenoyg


Monster Kill Posts: 318 Joined: 16 Dec 2007 gold

Posted: Sat Sep 27, 2008 2:17 am

Too many mistakes.. No response too! 6/10 only because the skills are all in symphony Sad

Try on though mate!
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sqjpop1


First Blood Posts: 12 Joined: 26 Apr 2008 gold

Posted: Sat Sep 27, 2008 4:49 am

Str: 15 + 0 ?!? (deathmancer = always dead?)
1st skill = lame version of after shock?
2nd skill = Ion shell?
Confused
plz be ingenious
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ghost432


Warnings : 1 First Blood Posts: 15 Joined: 02 Dec 2007 gold

Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2008 10:30 am

EVERYONE PLEASE VOTE ON WHAT SHE SHOULD CHANGE!!!!
and does anyone read the story or just look at the skills?
sqjpop1- i don't play much so i had no idea those 2 skills where allready in existance
mjs - what side should i balance them to?
jimboh- ty u did exactly what i wanted and i listened
KEEP RESPONDING AND VOTING!!!

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jaegerzewish


First Blood Posts: 19 Joined: 30 Aug 2008 gold

Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 1:32 am

dude, do u hav a photobucket account(or flickr)??
if u don't then make one.
do u epect us to go to those links just to see ur damn pic??
save the pictures from hiveworkshop, then upload them on your photobucket.
in your album, under the pic, there's a thing that says "IMG code"
copy that thing and paste it.
voila!! u have a pic on your post(it makes the post more interesting to read..

just give credits to the guys u got the pics from, it's all they want..
smile Smile
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Dae'num - the water tamer
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Pun'noe - the tree guardian




Ae'on - The Peasant Warrior
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it sucks..
I can't put anymore pics with links coz of the 500 char limit..

There's no I in team...
...but there's no US either...


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jaegerzewish


First Blood Posts: 19 Joined: 30 Aug 2008 gold

Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 1:40 am

dude, do u hav a photobucket account(or flickr)??
if u don't then make one.
do u epect us to go to those links just to see ur damn pic??
save the pictures from hiveworkshop, then upload them on your photobucket.
in your album, under the pic, there's a thing that says "IMG code"
copy that thing and paste it.
voila!! u have a pic on your post(it makes the post more interesting to read..

just give credits to the guys u got the pics from, it's all they want..
smile Smile
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My Hero ideas:
Dae'num - the water tamer
(no picture available, sorry)

Pun'noe - the tree guardian




Ae'on - The Peasant Warrior
(no picture either)

it sucks..
I can't put anymore pics with links coz of the 500 char limit..

There's no I in team...
...but there's no US either...


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pomlaos


Mega Kill Posts: 516 Joined: 27 Nov 2007 gold

Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 1:50 am

her movespeed is in the crapper. her str gain is .5 - -. and her agility is only 1 my god. pugde can just come at lvl one and rot her to death. haha. balance balance balance please.
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daneilster


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Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 2:08 am

make agility something like +1.6 and strenght like +1.5

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mjs


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Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 11:32 am

you can add in the icons by typing:
[url]"image's url"[/url]

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ghost432


Warnings : 1 First Blood Posts: 15 Joined: 02 Dec 2007 gold

Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 12:45 pm

to the people above who just saw what icons i wanted,
DON'T YOU THINK I TRYD THAT?
CBF making anymore accounts on anything atm..
pomlas the whole reason thats low is so that shes not imba, and pudge would die first anyway (though i have noticed that i fudged the MS)
daneilster ... fine...though i thinks shes better this way
MJS read above

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getatmedog


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Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2008 7:43 pm

Strength is still wayyyyyyyyyyy too low. would have 700 hp at lvl 25.
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