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The Night Stalker's Rise

Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 1:58 pm

Once Upon A Time .. ( Yeah Right )

Chapter 1 : Reasons Why..

There Was Once A Man Named Balazar Which Meant To The People Protector At Night. Even If Balazar Is Afraid Of The Night , He Continues His Job , No Matter What To Just Protect Lordaeron ( Forgot Spelling , Sorry ).


Chapter 2 : F E A R

One Dark And Stormy Night , Balazar Was Resting Under A Strong Tree , But Suddenly A Person Wearing A Hood Came To him And Said You will Die Soon . In The Night , The Night That You Are Afraid Of , F E A R Will Take You Away , Away From Lordaeron , Farther , FARTHER Than You Expect..

Then The Person Vanished Before Balazar Could Say A Single Word. After That Night , In The Morning His Friend , Purist Saw Balazar In Great Fear ...



Chapter 3 : Death , Or Is It ?

After Purist Talked With Balazar About What Happened , Purist Went On Night Duties With Balazar To Protect Him.
But Suddenly A Storm Was Born The Rain Was Like A Tsunami , Landslides Everywhere Appeared , Then Purist Saw That Balazar Vanished , Then When Purist Turned Around A Landslide Eats Purist Alive!!!

In The Morning , Everybody Saw Purist , Somehow Purist Lived By Casting Guardian Angel , But They All Asked What Happened To Balazar , Purist Said He Was Dead. But Who Knows ?

Ending : Arise Night Stalker ! ! ! !

Then One Stormy Night , The Hooded Man Has Found Balazar And Revived Him Using Some Form Of Magic.
Balazar Woke Up Seeing The Hooded Man , The Hooded Man Took him To The Lake Before Balazar Could Say A Word.

The Hooded Man Said : Look At The Water , Look At Yourself Now , Look What Fear Has Done To You .

Balazar Saw Himself He Had Vampire Body , Which Included Wings , That Night He Realized That He Was Faster , Stronger , Amazing Than Before.

The Hooded Man Said : Fool ! Do You Even Want To Go Back To Lordaeron ?! They Have Made Your Grave Already , That Idiot Purist Didn't Cast Guardian Angel So That You Could Be Saved From The Landslide AND Tsunami !! I Was The One Who Saved You , Come With Me , I Have Many Things To Teach You..

Balazar Said : Purist ... That Bas----...... I'll Come With You...I Am Fear Myself. I Shall Be Called , Balanar The Night Stalker !!!!!!

The Hooded Man Transformed Into His Real Form , Kel'Thuzad , The Lich Of The Scourge.

Kel'Thuzad Said : Very Good , I Need You , So That We Can Have Revenge On Humans Once And For All !

But Balanar Said : Where Are We To Go Master ?

Kel'Thuzad Said : I Am Amazed , We'll Go To The Land Of The Ancients , The War of The Ancients

The Land Of The Sentinel's And The Scourge , We Scourge Will Devour The Sentinel , In EVERY Way Possible...


Fin
First Story Ever , Hoped You Like It

Very Happy Cool


EDIT : Added A Bit Of Touch To The Fin , It Seems Bad IMO
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 4:19 pm

Nice story!
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Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 5:53 pm

Thanks Smile
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 2:59 am

A simple but nice story!!!! Very Happy
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 3:02 am

great! i like it..^^
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 4:15 am

Nice story but just one question, why is the first letter of every word in capitals?


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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 9:29 am

Dunno , Thats How I Type Sorry :P
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 10:26 am

O_O
wonderfully done
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 10:37 am

I love it! Simple and not boring to read. Smile
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Posted: Tue May 29, 2007 10:53 am

Nice one...

The way I like stories (separate paragraphs :p)

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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 6:54 am

Tee Hee....Maybe I Should Make More Stories

I Need Inspirations

>.<

I Made This Because I Was Afraid Of Teh Night

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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 8:31 am

Hayy....

Kids these days...... always afraid of the dark....
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 8:38 am

So its the story of balanar.. Where u get the story? Try send another hero story like Beastmaster or Bloodseeke...

BAD ENGLISH

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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 9:40 am

@adibafifi : ITS MY ENGLISH You're Talking About

ALSO Your English Is Bad Also

So Don't Bother Telling Something If It Isn't Even Good

THIS Is My Story , Don't Copy Paste EVER

I Made This Myself So Don't Take Credit

BAD Feedback From Above Poster
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Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 9:44 am

Now []bTHAT'S[/b] English.....
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