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The Night Stalker's Rise
Posted: Mon May 28, 2007 1:58 pmOnce Upon A Time .. ( Yeah Right )
Chapter 1 : Reasons Why..
There Was Once A Man Named Balazar Which Meant To The People Protector At Night. Even If Balazar Is Afraid Of The Night , He Continues His Job , No Matter What To Just Protect Lordaeron ( Forgot Spelling , Sorry ).
Chapter 2 : F E A R
One Dark And Stormy Night , Balazar Was Resting Under A Strong Tree , But Suddenly A Person Wearing A Hood Came To him And Said You will Die Soon . In The Night , The Night That You Are Afraid Of , F E A R Will Take You Away , Away From Lordaeron , Farther , FARTHER Than You Expect..
Then The Person Vanished Before Balazar Could Say A Single Word. After That Night , In The Morning His Friend , Purist Saw Balazar In Great Fear ...
Chapter 3 : Death , Or Is It ?
After Purist Talked With Balazar About What Happened , Purist Went On Night Duties With Balazar To Protect Him.
But Suddenly A Storm Was Born The Rain Was Like A Tsunami , Landslides Everywhere Appeared , Then Purist Saw That Balazar Vanished , Then When Purist Turned Around A Landslide Eats Purist Alive!!!
In The Morning , Everybody Saw Purist , Somehow Purist Lived By Casting Guardian Angel , But They All Asked What Happened To Balazar , Purist Said He Was Dead. But Who Knows ?
Ending : Arise Night Stalker ! ! ! !
Then One Stormy Night , The Hooded Man Has Found Balazar And Revived Him Using Some Form Of Magic.
Balazar Woke Up Seeing The Hooded Man , The Hooded Man Took him To The Lake Before Balazar Could Say A Word.
The Hooded Man Said : Look At The Water , Look At Yourself Now , Look What Fear Has Done To You .
Balazar Saw Himself He Had Vampire Body , Which Included Wings , That Night He Realized That He Was Faster , Stronger , Amazing Than Before.
The Hooded Man Said : Fool ! Do You Even Want To Go Back To Lordaeron ?! They Have Made Your Grave Already , That Idiot Purist Didn't Cast Guardian Angel So That You Could Be Saved From The Landslide AND Tsunami !! I Was The One Who Saved You , Come With Me , I Have Many Things To Teach You..
Balazar Said : Purist ... That Bas----...... I'll Come With You...I Am Fear Myself. I Shall Be Called , Balanar The Night Stalker !!!!!!
The Hooded Man Transformed Into His Real Form , Kel'Thuzad , The Lich Of The Scourge.
Kel'Thuzad Said : Very Good , I Need You , So That We Can Have Revenge On Humans Once And For All !
But Balanar Said : Where Are We To Go Master ?
Kel'Thuzad Said : I Am Amazed , We'll Go To The Land Of The Ancients , The War of The Ancients
The Land Of The Sentinel's And The Scourge , We Scourge Will Devour The Sentinel , In EVERY Way Possible...
Fin
First Story Ever , Hoped You Like It
EDIT : Added A Bit Of Touch To The Fin , It Seems Bad IMO
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Nice story!
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A simple but nice story!!!!

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Nice story but just one question, why is the first letter of every word in capitals?
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Dunno , Thats How I Type Sorry :P
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O_O
wonderfully done
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I love it! Simple and not boring to read.

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Nice one...
The way I like stories (separate paragraphs :p)
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Tee Hee....Maybe I Should Make More Stories
I Need Inspirations
>.<
I Made This Because I Was Afraid Of Teh Night
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Hayy....
Kids these days...... always afraid of the dark....
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So its the story of balanar.. Where u get the story? Try send another hero story like Beastmaster or Bloodseeke...
BAD ENGLISH
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@adibafifi : ITS MY ENGLISH You're Talking About
ALSO Your English Is Bad Also
So Don't Bother Telling Something If It Isn't Even Good
THIS Is My Story , Don't Copy Paste EVER
I Made This Myself So Don't Take Credit
BAD Feedback From Above Poster
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Now []bTHAT'S[/b] English.....
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