A story hope you enjoy it 5 (Life in the city of guilds 4)

A story hope you enjoy it 5 (Life in the city of guilds 4)

Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 8:23 am

Part 1-3:

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Last time...

Our guy got caught by bad guys,..



Sorry can't think of a title


Edward was finally brought to a barren mountain so he cannot have the right magical energies to escape. He is chained with long irons but not long for him to leave the cave’s entrance. For days he wondered if he will ever get out of the place and he also wondered why he is given a warm shelter, decent food and water, even the wounds from the attack are being treated. He thought to himself:

"These guys are even weirder than the weirds, I know I'm lucky to be kept alive, but then I know their evil plot, so why did they imprison me instead of just killing me?"

The next morning...

It was the time of sunrise, when he thought to himself:

"What could be inside the depths of this cave?"

He walked deeper into the cave, then he saw a chest with it's key on it's lock. He opened it to check what's inside it. To his amazement, it was Gold!, lot's of it! Silver, Diamonds, Rubies, it was filled with expensive metal and precious stones. Then he heard a voice, "This boy has seen to much, it's the firing squad for you! He heard gunshots and he saw the musket balls coming at him very slowly. He was shouting, Ahhh...!!!!, then, as he was just about to be hit, he woke up, and realized it was all a dream.

"What could that be, what a weird dream!" he said.

He got up and decided to see for himself what was really inside the cave. When he got there he saw...

"Now, let's see what's inside, a ske-ske-skeleton! Ahh... now I see this place is a real outcast prison! But wait why are there tomes here, it's amazing their pages have not yet decayed while the body has decayed. Maybe it came later. But if another person wrote them, there should be another body here, another weird thing, the cover is made from expensive leather and" he said.

When he came back to the mouth of the cave, he saw a flock of birds of all kinds crowding at something, then he realized it was his breakfast the birds were feeding on...

"Noooo!!!!!!!... get out of here, that's my food!" he shouted.

When he saw none left, he got so angry...

"DAMN, that was my breakfast, well, I guess this is my firing squad" he added.

While he was stomping in frustration, he accidentally stepped on the plate. It broke and it hurt his feet.

“Ouch!!!! Dammit birds, oh wait what’s this? A pink feather? How nice” he said.

Later that day, a bird landed by his side carrying a small piece of bread. The bird moved the bread as if it was offering the bread to Edward…

“Wait a second, are you one of those birds who took my meal?” he said.

The bird placed the loaf by his hand and then, it closed its eyes and bowed down to him as if it was asking for forgiveness…

“Apology accepted little guy.” he said

After he finished the loaf, he played with the bird for quite a while. Then after a few hours, the bird flew away.

That night, it was a bit chili. So he went to the deepest part of the cave and slept there.

The next morning he saw two ethereal men fighting. One was like a ninja, it was a grayish purple color and was carrying a sword. While the other one, was a bit scary, it was wearing a black hood, it had two daggers and it’s face cannot be seen save for his eyes. Then a voice was heard…

“The battle will result on how you feel”

Then he woke up, he realized it was morning. His breakfast was there waiting for him, this time there were no more birds so he enjoyed that meal to his satisfaction. Later that day, saw the bird, it was carrying something, so stretched his hand to take it from the birds mouth. To his amazement, it was an Izzet Signet!

“You are a bird of big surprises, and your strong, despite the fact that you’re small, you carried this! Time to get out of here…”

He used the Signet’s energy to conjure up a miraculous escape.

He rushed towards Nivix, and spoke to Niv-Mizzet…

“Ah…Edward, where’ve you been?, everyone was worried sick about you.” Said the Firemind(Niv-Mizzet)

“Sir, no time to explain, I did some research in the cave and found out that the hostile takeover involves three-quarters of the Boros Legion and a full force of the Azorius Senate.” He replied

“That’s a big force! Does it include senators?” says the Firemind in shock.

“Sir, this is no time for a joke, it’s in five weeks!” Edward added.

“No way how do we prepare for that? The size of that army is too much to handle.”

“Don’t worry I have a plan!”

Five weeks past, and they prepared a large army, but even this was less than half the size of their enemy’s. As battle was about to erupt, everyone started to feel dizzy…the land became useless for it’s energies. Edward blocked the spell, but everyone else fell asleep…


“Hahahahahahahahaha…might as well surrender Edward, or if you join, we’ll spare your life…” the enemy yelled.

Edward looked at opponent’s army, horror can be seen in his eyes. Then suddenly, he smiled and laughed and yelled back:

“Yeah right granpa!, as if I’m defeated, remember, there are other ways of beating you!”

All of a sudden, large tentacles burst from underneath the ground the enemy was standing on. Some of them, got tossed high in the air, while the others got crushed between the tentacles or got swallowed up by the Grozoths.

“Grozoths, but how?” said the granpa enemy.

“Apparently, you forgot about the underground rivers and sewers when you rendered the lands useless.” replied Edward.

Edward watched as the Grozoths that he summoned decimate the enemy. Then he ordered one to throw the granpa to his direction…

“You are under arrest, Agustin IV.” he added.

“This is not over yet!” Agustin replied.

“Really? I ordered some more Grozoths to decimate the Simic “womb” thingy” he replied.

After a few hours, everyone woke up and celebrated their victory until midnight. Then a loud roar that almost deafened everyone shook the city. They realized that battle was not yet over…



To be continued…
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 9:22 am

Like it as your other stories!Perhaps you can write more?

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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 9:29 am

YA. Nice one. I like it as much as your other stories though it would really help if you would keep some new title. Its getting confusing-only the ending numbers being different in the title and i do not know what i have read and what i havent.
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 9:55 am

This might get cut up a bit. I need to think of more for this part. A new story line might pop-up.
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 10:03 am

Like it happened in my story? i was thinking of a completely new story then poof, i got some other idea seconds b4 writing and i wrote my new idea instead. This was for both my serious fan-fics. Not my fan-fic of a satyrical take on dota heroes.
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 1:32 pm

Ya. A completely new story. Very different. It's about well... let's not get to that yet...

This one is gonna be long. I need to think of more stuff for the next parts of this story.
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