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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 4:27 pm

I was going to write the next chapter today but seeing as there are no messages, I shall write them after people comment.
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Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2007 5:29 pm

Well.Feel free to write them now.Looking forward to read them!

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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 11:45 am

Hey Eustace, i wonder who shall be ignaorant enough to do what your avi suggests. Still there is one reason as to why I wont write further chapters. The reason is bow bow, woof woof. Oops got used to speaking in dog language. Anyway, the above stated sentence which was typed and tought in dog language is
...............Translating.beep beep.....Process complete.

Translated version: I am currently reading Harry Potter's final installment. In fact, I took time off from reading the book only to tell you guys at DS about this. Sorry.(Dog language is so much more shorter than English,isnt it-mind you, these words in the bracket were not said by me in doggy language, it is just a extra comment)
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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 1:44 pm

Chapter three over. I posted this in my other story by mistake.
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Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 8:37 am

I like the story
The beginning of chapter 2 is a little confusing though.
Keep it up:)
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Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 2:49 pm

Well......he goes home. Then fast forward to the end of the month and in the middle i teel you what had happened. And also, now i have two posssible endings to this story. In the larger novel version, both come in the story as non-endings. But as this is the shorter version, things have to be fast forwarded and I can include only one ending. I am typing the full version on word and anyone who wants to read it can do so. Send me a PM and I will PM you the full version. I am currently finishing the prologue. I am writing this story here to get the ratings as to how good it is.
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Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 6:52 am

"Daunted, Feralas jumped back in surprise and twirled around and saw to his surprise that Feralas was standin behind him, his blue blade reflecting the setting sun's crimson rays. Ferals jumped back and landed on one foot."

That is what I was referring to as confusing.

Could ya pm me the full version?

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Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 8:54 am

Oops. Rikilion. Not Feralas. Actually, Feralas was to be the name of my hero. Then changed it. So the confusin. Will change it noiw. Thx for alerting.
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Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 9:28 am

Chapter Four complete.
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 4:02 pm

Chapter Five over. Null. Void Khatham-Shud. Another death as the title suggests but umm...wait a warning:

SPOILERS AHEAD. PLEASE DO NOT READ CONFIDENTIAL. There. Warnings over.

Where was I....ah. yes, another death but not a permanent one. Adds some emotion but I assure you, people who have come to like the name Feralas will find it in the next chapter not as a reference to the past but in the sense that something is happening to him. I couldnt kill off such a main character as Feralas(ya he is main) so soon, could I?
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 9:52 pm

Non-Dota related, but i still i like it. For and unknown reason it reminds me a bit the anime Hayabusa is. (i don't watch anime, just watched a short video clip)
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Posted: Wed Jul 25, 2007 10:21 pm

What's your college course flameseeker? You're good in creating stories..
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 8:11 am

@ Dark Phoen1x, never seen Hayabusa in my l;ife. Never even heard about it or tasted it or felt it or smelled it. Strange that you are reminded of Hayabusa.

@ mv2ovm, I am not yet in college, duh...I am just thirteen yrs,1 month and 21 days old. I would probably take something in literature though. I am intrested in it.
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 8:29 am

do the next!
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Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2007 9:43 am

Umm. Kristine, i think there might be a teensy tinsy flaw in your post. If you mean do the next story, the flaw is there. If not no flaw. I am writing the next chapter btw.
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