The Evil Greater than the Lich King: Part Three

Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 7:52 pm

I guessed the 3rd chapter from the 2nd one
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 2:43 pm

i am gonna post it.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 2:53 pm

Ow, you make me more ???????
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:00 pm

DS crashed today? neway, chapter three is on folks, enjoy. And also my story for the story competetion.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:29 pm

Chapter Four complete. Not much action till now. Still the build up on.
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Posted: Sun Jan 06, 2008 3:30 pm

Chapter Four complete. Not much action till now. Still the build up on.
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Posted: Mon Jan 07, 2008 4:17 pm

Chapter Five complete.

*Wonders to self wether anyone read chapter four coz ther have been no comments*
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Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2008 9:34 am

Oh man, sorry. I've been busy to create my own story to join the story competition. ^^
Ah, at least a good battle. I bored because no more battle since chap 2. As usual, keep up good work. No more comment.
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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 7:50 am

hehe. No battles coz the next few chaps are mainly battles.
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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 8:18 am

Chap six complete. chap seven prolly tommorrow or day after.
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Posted: Thu Jan 10, 2008 3:32 pm

WOW, -didn't patient enough to wait the next chap-. It will be a great battle!
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 7:47 am

it sure will be but the wait is also gonna last some time more. for 5 more hours.
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Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2008 4:07 pm

Chapter Seven complete. Took a little longer to finish the story.
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Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 5:33 am

I'm going to have to say you've gotten alot better, if you compare this to the first of the trilogy you'll see how much better you've become. I read it pretty briefly but i couldn't find any big errors. Only criticism i can give you is that the plot isn't exceedingly gripping. Best active writer on the site i think (unless darkpheonix is still writing behind blue eyes was really good).
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Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2008 1:20 pm

I know! Thats what i was thinking. I was thinking that i, no, my stories have really matured. Few months back, this story would have been extremely different. OK, btw, i got one imp. announcment to make:

LISTEN UP. MY STORY IS CURRENTLY VERY UNSTABLE. I mean that currently, there are various endings this could have and so i want ur feedback to continue. So, the next chapter only comes when i recieve enpugh feedback.

And yes, i know this plot isnt excatly enticing. And i dont think phoenix is gonna continue. Also, I just wanna say that I am not yet excellent since this is only like the third story(apart from compositons) i have ever written. So, i promise, that with more feedback, i shall keep writing stories, and with every story, my skill shall improve!
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