Broly - "Legendary Super Saiyan"

Broly - "Legendary Super Saiyan"

Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 4:13 am

NAME: Broly - "Legendary Super Saiyan"
Affiliation: Scourge
Range: 150 | Move Speed: 300
Primary: STR
Str: 27 + 2.65 | Agi: 15 + 1.5 | INT: 17 + 1.85
Damage: 63 – 68 | HP: 589 | Mana: 249
HP Regen: 1.49 | Mana Regen: 1.28
Attack Speed: 1.08 | Armor: 4

Story: Broly he is born with a level of power greater than most elite Saiyan warriors, and he is mentally unsettled as an adult, partially due to the crying of the infant Goku in the crib next to him. He eventually becomes the "Legendary Super Saiyan" and his destructive tendencies are quelled by a special control device created by his father, Paragus. After Paragus lures Sapphiron, Illidan, and their companions to another planet, Broly recalls Illidan and goes into a rage. He is eventually defeated, and manages to make his way into a escape pod. He later lands on Earth and goes into a frozen state until the crying of Illidan's son, Sapphiron, awakes him. He is killed by Arthas (frostmourne spirit), Lich King and Arthas, though blood samples make their way into the hands of a industrialist who creates cloned warriors. The clone eventually awakes and becomes mixed with bio-liquid, transforming him into Bio-Broly. He is killed by Illidan, Lich King, and Arthas after seawater solidifies his body.
He also got resurrected in the future galaxy of the ancients.

Skills:

Kamehame Wave(Broly)

-Broly can release a very unusual wave of energy dealing huge amount of damage at the cost of high mana.

Level.1: Deals 150Chaos Damage and reduces targets armor by 2 for 2 seconds
Level.2: Deals 175Chaos Damage and reduces targets armor by 3 for 3 seconds
Level.3: Deals 200Chaos Damage and reduces targets armor by 4 for 3.5seconds
Level.4: Deals 225Chaos Damage and reduces targets armor by 5 for 4seconds

Cooldown: 20/18/16/14seconds
Mana Cost: 180
Casting Range: 800
Casting Time: Instant
Animation: Maybe a chainlightning with a black energy.

Dark Punch

-Broly will dash towards the target knocking it back and dealing a percentage of the distance.

Level.1: Knockbacks at 300Range/Deals 20% of the distance
Level.2: Knockbacks at 400Range/Deals 30% of the distance
Level.3: Knockbacks at 500Range/Deals 40% of the distance
Level.4: Knockbacks at 600Range/Deals 50% of the distance

Cooldown: 25seconds
Mana Cost: 150
Casting Range: MELEE(150)
Casting Time: 1.2sec
Animation: Broly will simply smash the target and pushes it afterwards.

Legendary Warrior

-This skill grants Broly certain increments because of his bloodline.

Level.1: Grants Broly 5%Increased attackspeed and 15% Base Damage in bonus
Level.2: Grants Broly 10%Increased attackspeed and 20% Base Damage in bonus
Level.3: Grants Broly 15%Increased attackspeed and 25% Base Damage in bonus
Level.4: Grants Broly 20%Increased attackspeed and 30% Base Damage in bonus

(Passive Skill)
Animation: Broly will recieve a pentagram projectile at its head which is proving the mark of the Saiyan

Legendary Saiyan Form

-Broly's ultimate form granting him supreme power.
(Allows Broly to cast Dark Combo if current hp is below 10%)
Dark Combo: Strikes the target several times dealing 100% of base damage for the first hit and 90% for the second and 80% for the third and 70% for the fourth and a final damage of 250%.(Requires 50% of current mana however it cannot be activated if the used mana is only 200 or below)
Level.1: Grants 300 HP and 10Bonus armor for 10seconds
Level.2: Grants 400 HP and 15Bonus armor for 20seconds
Level.3: Grants 500 HP and 20Bonus armor for 30seconds

Cooldown: 180/120/60
Mana Cost: 250/350/450
Casting Time: Instant
Animation: Broly's hair will turn into a yellowish gold state.
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Last edited by HateTheStriker on Mon Sep 15, 2008 11:34 am; edited 1 time in total

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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 5:10 am

hmmm an ok hero ... but lacks in synergy ...
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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 7:30 am

BARD MAN SMASH DBZ!!!

That's all Bard Man wants to say.
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This is the point from which I could never return,
and if I back down now then forever I burn.
This is the point from which I could never retreat,
cause if I turn back now there can never be peace.
This is the point from which I will die and succeed,
living the struggle, I know I'm alive when I bleed.
From now on it can never be the same as before,
cause the place that I'm from doesn't exist anymore.

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Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2008 7:48 am

First skill, is fine.
Second skill.. -.- this makes me really angry. if we already know the distance it's going to go back, we will know the percentage.
Level.1: Knockbacks at 300Range/Deals 150 damage
Level.2: Knockbacks at 400Range/Deals 240 damage
Level.3: Knockbacks at 500Range/Deals 350 damage
Level.4: Knockbacks at 600Range/Deals 480 damage
you know you could of just said that. and plus, it's super imba, nerf! it's as strong and suitable for an ulti
Third Skill - okay, but hardly a synergy here
Ulti - dk's ulti'ish, yeah hows this going to work with other skills?

no synergy. might be a permabash (3rd skill) but seriously needs improvement.
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 11:35 am

second skill damage percentage reduced.
ultimate recreated I added a new gain for Broly...
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 1:13 pm

3rd skill is very op...luna got only 27% attack increase...no speed increase..also ulti is op imo...you do all in all 520%attack...that is if you do 100dmg 520dmg...with 200 1040 and so on...so quite a lot...
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Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2008 5:09 pm

IMO, the third skill is not that op; if you are going to compare it to Luna then consider that she has a damage AURAAAA... IE all friendly heroes get the boost not just her. So the two are not so easy to compare, it is like a combo of Troll AS aura and Luna's but only for the hero. So I would say that it is a balanced spell that could maybe require a slight decrease.

Im not so sure about the desired effect of the first skill... think about it. If the target has a bunch of armor then this skill is going to be very underpowered... unless the armor reduction takes effect before the damage of the skill... which is it? FYI.. If its not magic damage then it will be subject to armor damage reduction, for more info on this please check the library.

2nd skill: This is a little OP considering you are going to knock someone back the full range of snipers attack. If used with excelent timeing you could definately use this to knock people into the woods just as the trees respawn which would trap them there. Other than that It looks ok, the damage doesnt seem to hurt that hard and the stun only seems to be 1.75 or about that, which is fine.

ULT: Dont really know about this part, A little hard to understand.

Overall: Decent idea but lacks a synergy of skills. 6.5/10
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