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Frostmane - Frost Revenant
Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2008 11:56 amA hero idea for blodcrafts hero idea contest.
Frostmane - Frost Revenant
Range: 550 | Move Speed: 310
Primary: AGI
Str: 15 + 1.4 | Agi: 20 + 2.7 | Int: 16 + 1.6
Damage: 45 - 52 | HP: 416 | Mana: 208
HP Regen: 0.67 | Mana Regen: 0.65
Attack Speed: 1.6 | Armor: 2
A Revenant made by Kel'Thuzad from the ices of Northrend, to serve the scourge. He was discarded as weak, after Razor was created, and he was diasmbled by his creator, and left in the place, in which he was created in. While serching for new allies in the far north, Ryali found frostmane, and axidently brought him back to life. Suprisingly, he did not attack her, but oferen his undying loyality for a chance to get revenge on Kel'thuzad, as well as Razor, who took his place in the Scourge, and Ultimatly on the Lich King. Ryali acepted his help. He now serves the sentinels, but unbestknown to anyone, once the lich king is destroyed, he intends to take his place on the frozen throne....
Soul Freeze (S)
Frostmane freezes the enemies soul, leaving them chilled to the bone, barely able to move.
Level 1 - Deals 40 dmg to the target unit, and slows its As and MS by 10% for 2 sec. Any attack to that unit in the next 4 seconds will burn mana equal to 15% of dmg dealt.
Level 2 - Deals 50 dmg to the target unit, and slows its As and MS by 10% for 2 sec. Any attack to that unit in the next 4 seconds will burn mana equal to 15% of dmg dealt.
Level 3 - Deals 60 dmg to the target unit, and slows its As and MS by 15% for 3 sec. Any attack to that unit in the next 5 seconds will burn mana equal to 20% of dmg dealt.
Level 4 - Deals 70 dmg to the target unit, and slows its As and MS by 20% for 3 sec. Any attack to that unit in the next 5 seconds will burn mana equal to 20% of dmg dealt.
Mana Cost: 65/70/75/80
Cooldown: 10/10/15/15
Framework: The hero fires the forst wyrm attack at the enemy, where it explodes like frost nova.
Frost Sentry (passive)
Frostmane can emit the essence of frost itself from his body. If anyone dares to attack him, frostmanes body will retaliate with a freezing blast.
Level 1 - Slows all enemies AS and MS in a 200 AOE by 3%. Every fifth attack a unit makes on frostmane will resault in a 30 dmg frost nova that will slow the units MS and AS by 5% for 1 second.
Level 2 - Slows all enemies AS and MS in a 250 AOE by 7%. Every fifth attack a unit makes on frostmane will resault in a 40 dmg frost nova that will slow the units MS and AS by 8% for 1 second.
Level 3 - Slows all enemies AS and MS in a 300 AOE by 11%. Every fifth attack a unit makes on frostmane will resault in a 50 dmg frost nova that will slow the units MS and AS by 11% for 2 seconds.
Level 4 - Slows all enemies AS and MS in a 350 AOE by 15%. Every fifth attack a unit makes on frostmane will resault in a 60 dmg frost nova that will slow the units MS and AS by 14% for 2 seconds.
Mana Cost: -
Cooldown: -
Framework: Your base Ms is decresed, while all enemies get a negative aura on them that slows their Ms and AS. Basicly works like the Shivas Guard aura.
Icy Armour (passive)
Frostmanes armour is filled and covered by ice, making the Frost Revenant more resistant to his element.
Level 1 - Lowers any ms loss by 15%. Increses armour by 1. Any unit that attacks Frostmane has its MS and AS decreased by 5% for 1 second.
Level 2 - Lowers any ms loss by 20%. Increses armour by 2. Any unit that attacks Frostmane has its MS and AS decreased by 6% for 1 second.
Level 3 - Lowers any ms loss by 25%. Increses armour by 2. Any unit that attacks Frostmane has its MS and AS decreased by 7% for 2 seconds.
Level 4 - Lowers any ms loss by 30%. Increses armour by 3. Any unit that attacks Frostmane has its MS and AS decreased by 8% for 2 seconds.
Mana Cost: n/a
Cooldown: n/a
Framework: The hero is engulphed by icy smoke simmilar to the one caused by Maledict, just blue.
Soul of Frost (S)
Frostmanes very soul is made of ice, and he emmits that energy throught the battlefield, chilling his foes.
Level 1 - Infilicts Frostbites to all enemies in a 700 AOE. Frosbites slow enemies AS and MS by 10% and deals 30 dmg/sec for 5 sec. Any further dmg dealt to frostbited unit by frostmane is increased by 15%.
Level 2 - Infilicts Frostbites to all enemies in a 800 AOE. Frosbites slow enemies AS and MS by 15% and deals 45 dmg/sec for 6 sec. Any further dmg dealt to frostbited unit by frostmane is increased by 20%.
Level 3 - Infilicts Frostbites to all enemies in a 900 AOE. Frosbites slow enemies AS and MS by 20% and deals 60 dmg/sec for 7 sec. Any further dmg dealt to frostbited unit by frostmane is increased by 25%.
Level 4 - With scepter - Infilicts Frostbites to all enemies in a 1000 AOE. Frosbites slow enemies AS and MS by 25% and deals 75 dmg/sec for 8 sec. Any further dmg dealt to frostbited unit by frostmane is increased by 25%.
Mana Cost: 200/250/300/300
Cooldown: 75/65/55/45
Framework: All enemies in the AOE get struck by frost nova. While they have frostbite they have icy smoke around them.
EDIT:Buffed all skills, and his stat gain.
-Lowered the CD and Mana cost on the first skill making it spamable.
-Lowered the self MS loss from Frost Sentry, and increased the slow from 5%/10%/10%/15% to 7%/10%/13%/16%
-The third skill now gives a slight AS and MS loss for those who attack frostmane
-Lowered the CD on the spell, making it usable more often.
EDIT 2:
-Changed frost sentry.
-Buffed his agi gain a bit, as well as his base stats
-Changed the story
EDIT3:
-Buffed the ulti a little.
-Changed the first skill a bit.
Gunslingers note: Lol I never worked on a hero idea this much!
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Last edited by TheGunslinger on Fri Sep 12, 2008 5:28 pm; edited 3 times in total
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I dont know about this one man... hmmm. Maybe you could change the story to someone conjuring up Frost to chalenge Lighting.. Like the Sentinal trying to counteract the power of the Lighting Revenants speed with the Frostmane.
1st skill: Underpowered. Make it like a weak version of Lich's Ult, chain frost that decreases in damage each blast. haha
2nd skill: Also needs a buff, shouldnt slow you.. Polar Bears move just as fast when it is freezing cold why shouldnt he.
3rd skill: I suppose you could make this a permanent frost armor slowing any that attack him for a short duration and adding armor.
ULT: I would make this like Revs ult: every 3 seconds an AOE recieves a Frost blast for 25 damage.. increaseing per lvl or something like that.
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Yeah, I guess I should buff him a bit. Posibly his lousy stat gain too. This is an older hero idea I made, and I will change it a bit now. ( I Just CnP-ed it for the contest ^^)
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haha but dude CnP is for noobies. You need to be proud of your posts. I have been working on my latest Hero idea for three days.
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Three days? No I dont do that. When I get an idea, I make it in a matter of 30 minutes (I will forget it otherwise ^^), post it, and w8 for feedback, then fix it acordingly. Sometimes is much better to get feedback on a raw idea, rather then working it out for a few days, and then realising that ppl have many complaints about it. I just do it for fun.
PS: Its my own hero idea, just that I made it 2 months ago or so, and I made it in a few minutes. I wanted to enter the contest, but I had no idea, so I just used this one.
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I dont usually work on one thing exclusively. I think of idea.. jot it down. Roll it around in my head for a few hours. Decide if it is worth making.. If it is I come up with a few of the skills then let it sit for a day. Come back, see if I still like it. If I dont then I save it im my "not good enough" folder and move on. If I do then I make a few more skills and think about balancing issues. I have a lot of fun making these things. I dont like to rush it.
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hmm his str gain is very low. so balance that. like getatmedog said your skills needs to be buff. and i think i might also make some of my hero ideas down pretty soon. since i have been writing them down during the summer when i got bored of sitting around all day. so i got like a bunch at home. lolz.
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at the 2nd skill, dont u think its wuite unoriginal, its just like a shiva's gaurd or degen aura, only u get slowed also. try to make it like the skill what getatmedog said, a spell that triggers a frost nova around u every 2 secs.
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i thought it would be a little more similar to razor lol. yea the skills can be buffed lol. cause if you kept it like this youd only be able to slow ppl lol.
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I changed him again. Hopefully, this will make him powerful enough.
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i liked the 2nd skill change.
is there any synergies??
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The skills are a bit like Lich's and Razor, but, considering that they were all related, I can't critiscize.
1st skill - pretty much, underpowered lich skill
2st skill - don't know where this came from but seems fine, oh yeah ice/frost/snow makes you slow "dotamorph u r stupid"
3rd skill - again, a lich passive
ulti - yeah, kind of a buffed remake of the first skill, not too much of a killer too, a bit weak, good for farming, i guess we need those farming ults once in a while, so... -- accepted skill, it's fine
the skills used in this hero are quite unoriginal, and i'm not looking at the story facts, i'm looking at the fact that it's too much like Lich, ahh yes, it's true what Kel'thuzad said in your story, he wasn't as good/rememberful (don't know if that is a word) as Razor was. End of my critique.
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Suggestion! Make the third skill a skill that increases IAS when attacking Frostbited units. Hes AGI after all.
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cool..
nice hero idea...
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Changed it and buffed it.....again. Hope its better now....
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