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Poll - My first fanfic

Posted: Sun Dec 21, 2008 8:46 pm

I'm thinking of making a new series, about dota heroes and their legend. Here is a sample of my first story. If you like or dislike it, vote in the poll, and if I get a positive review, I will continue writing.(and yes, I know the italics part is from the heroes page, I just want to hear your ideas before continuing)

Shendelzare Silkwood - The Vengeful Spirit

Once a mighty warden and sister of Mortred, the maniacal laughter of her sibling and the chakram of hers covered in her own just drawn blood is a sight that even today still haunts Shendelzare. Hearing the laments of her loyal daughter, Elune decided to not forsake her, and she graced her with a new body along with the ability to harness powers from the nether-world and a fighting spirit only owned by those who have met death itself. Shendelzare now leads the Sentinel's army, fearless of what could come at her, an avatar of the dreadful emotions within the soul of her former self.

The battle between the Sentinel and the Scourge… this is how legends are born.

EDIT: If my stories receive a positive review, I'll be switching between the Sentinel and the Scourge heroes.

EDIT 2: I finished my story early and decided to post it.

Shendelzare Silkwood - The Vengeful Spirit

Once a mighty warden and sister of Mortred, the maniacal laughter of her sibling and the chakram of hers covered in her own just drawn blood is a sight that even today still haunts Shendelzare. Hearing the laments of her loyal daughter, Elune decided to not forsake her, and she graced her with a new body along with the ability to harness powers from the nether-world and a fighting spirit only owned by those who have met death itself. Shendelzare now leads the Sentinel's army, fearless of what could come at her, an avatar of the dreadful emotions within the soul of her former self.

The battle between the Sentinels and the Scourge… this is how legends are born.

Shendelzare Silkwood and her night elves were scouting near the Scourge base as a last attempt to destroy the Frozen Throne. All of a sudden, one of the night elves gave a shout as she saw a huge Scourge army heading to the world tree. As all of the archers took aim, Shendelzare stopped them with a wave of her arm and said: “We are here on renaissance only. Besides, they outnumber us almost 5:1”

The night elves murmured in agreement. Shendelzare and her night elves quickly withdrew from the ambush.

Later…

“An army of undead approaching? They must be stopped at once!” shouted Furion at the meeting of the heroes.

“Yes, I agree, but we can we do? We are powerless against such a force” said Rikimaru.

Furion called Shendelzare over and whispered: “Shendelzare, you and your night elves are the only ones who can stop this army. Are you prepared to go to battle?”

The Vengeful Spirit replied: “I will take 30 of my strongest warriors to fight them.”

All the others at the table expressed their concern, for they thought it would be sure suicide.

Shendelzare left the room and prepared for battle.

On the journey to meet the undead army…

“… Do you think we can do it” said Shendelzare’s most powerful soldier.

Shendelzare blinked to attention. Her mind had been wandering again. Ever since that night with her sister…
Shendelzare needed time to gather her thoughts and think of a battle plan. She called for a rest as the rest of the troops slowed down.

“Hmmmm” She thought to herself. “How can I win against such a strong army”

Suddenly, the horn sounded, as one of her night elf scouts had seen the enemy approaching. She gathered her battle armor and prepared for a long battle. She rushed into the battlefield, slashing at all the enemies. All of a sudden, she felt a cold chill come over her. The lich king had arrived.

The feared Kel’Thuzad gathered his energy and unleashed a blast of frost at Shendelzare and her night elves. Shendelzare felt the frost slowing down her movements, making her vulnerable. All of a sudden, she unleashed a scream of terror, frightening Kel’Thuzad and the rest of the undead. She threw a magic missile at the lich king, stunning him. Suddenly, the lich king unleashed a chain frost on the nearest night elf, and it slowly started bouncing towards Shendelzare. It would only be a while before she got hit.

“ARRRG” Shendelzare screamed as the chain frost hit her, freezing her limbs. She could feel herself slipping away. Shendelzare unleashed another scream of terror, frighting the undead. She quickly used her command aura to take command of her units, boosting their damage. The remaining night elves quickly took out the undead. Soon, the lich king was the only one left. Protected by his frost armor, he unleashed another frost nova. Just before it could hit her, she nether swapped herself and Kel’Thuzad, and Kel’Thuzad’s own frost nova hit him. The lich king, frozen, became easy prey to the remaining night elves and Shendelzare herself.

All of a sudden, Shendelzare and her archers felt the ground shake beneath them. Reinforcements were arriving, but for which force. She knew that if it was the undead, the weak night elves and she would be destroyed. All at once, she felt a magical energy cleanse her body, and felt her energy level rising. It was Purist Thunderwrath, her guardian angel…

Next time, be prepared to explore the legend of Terrorblade!
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