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Lestat9208


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Cry of the Warden...

Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 7:17 am

My first story... Hope you enjoy it! Very Happy

Cry of the Warden...

The forgotten lands of Kalimdor used to protect not only the reclusive night elves and the wandering and peacefull beasts, but it also used to provide a good camouflage and a hiding place for the killers and the marauders who got sick and tired to rob the patethic peasants.
And the worst nightmare of these criminals were the great wardens. By their nature, the wardens never stop chasing their prade untill they are killed or cought. One of these great wardens was Mortred.
Mortred was a skillful Warden, one of the best, and Maiev Starsong, the Warden who chased Illidan untill he died, was her sister. Hired by some elders to chase the great marauder Damodar, Mortred swared on her own life she would catch and kill Damodar.
And so she began her chase...
In the misteryous forests of Damodar`s domain, she didn`t know what awates her... Fear apeared in her heart, as she got more far away from her homelands. The forest seemed endless. She began to hear voices, voices that called her and called her. Before she had lost her mind, she summoned her Spirit of Vengeance to help her.
"Mercurial, I want you and your nightlings to scout the forests, I fear that here is more than just angry spirits!"
"So be it, my misstres!", and she had disapeared.
Mortred continued her quest, with fear in her heart though. The forest seemed endless...
Suddenly, a man`s voice started to laugh. Mortred was in her battle position, waiting to fight.
"No use to be ready for that dear, said the voice. You`re end is near!"
And in that moment, she saw the blur of her target: Damodar. Her knives started cutting through the air. In her pannic, she didn`t realise that Damodar stude and watched her, laughing and laughing about her worthless efforts of fighting. Damodar, bored, blinked to her and stabbed her with his venomous knive. Mortred screamed worthless... Mercurial appeared out of no were to help Mortred; she feeled her misstres` pain form her voice screaming. Mercurial charged to Damodar in the purpose of killing him, but Damodar, slick, dodged her and stabbed her with his knive. Two agonizing screams emerged from the deap forest. The wisps began singing the cry of the warden...

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The little night elf town began celebrating the victory of Mortred, as she arrived with Damodar`s head pearced by a spear in her hand of iron. But nobody suspected that in Mortred`s body, an evil demon has found his home. It was the spirit of Damodar...

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Mortred demanded a celebration of her victory, with elven fire crackers, the best in the world of Azeroth. Everybody was singing and dancing, not even suspecting that Mortred was possesed. Nobody but one of Mercurial`s Spirits, Shendelzare, who has ran away from Mercurial. She was a renegade, but she was a smart one. When she looked at Mortred, in her red eyes, she knew something isn`t at hand. So she decided to talk to Mortred.
"Misstres, I see you a bit stressed out. Is it something I can do for you?" asked Shendelzare.
Mortred smiled.
"No, my sister, I`m just fine. But I plan to burn this little town. I fear evil spirits has desecrated these lands."
"How can you say such a thing? This grove has been protected for centuries. If one of the elders find out about what you are planning to do, it would be..."
"Ah, don`t start with that. Don`t you feel the stench of these creatures? This are no longer our brethrens, these are monster. We are protected by Elune, unlike them. I should summon Mercurial and her spirits. This land has to be cleaned. Mercurial!!!"
Mortred`s avatar has arrived. At the sight of Shendelzare, Mercurial sayd:
"Shendelzare, don`t make me bannish you. You are no longer my spirits. Leave these lands. Misstres, you`ve called?"
"Yes Mercurial, it is time to clean the lands, as we`ve planned. And Shendelzare will help us, right?"
Shendelzare looked in Mortred`s eyes, and without thinking, sayd:
"Yes! Let`s get it over with!"

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The little town was still burning. Shendelzare looked at the ruins, and she reminded that she have seen at Mortred some powerfull skills, skills that she didn`t have before. She could blink from villager to villager, slaying them, and then she melded into the darkness, apearing again. Then she saw Mortred`s weapon blazing, giving her more power. It was incredible. And then she realized...
It wasn`t the town that had to be destroyed, it was Mortred, Mercurial and theyr minions. She wanted to run away, because she couldn`t fight them all, but it was too late. Mortred was behind her. With one hit, Mortred injured Shendelzare deadly. Shendelzare was agonizing, and Mortred left her, leaving her to die slowly. With her dying breath, she began to prey to Elune...
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Eustace2


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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 8:21 am

Hey,nice first story!I like it!Can you write sum more?

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flameseeker


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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 9:04 am

Nice one. I shall ignore the mistakes(grammatical). Nice story on how Mortred became evil. But Mr=ortred was previously known as Leiya, rite? Still, a writer has full authority to change everything about their own original characters.
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 9:05 am

nice story dude!!!


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Lestat9208


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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 4:09 pm

And yeah, sorry for my grammar mistakes, in Eastern Europe is hard to find a good english teacher, and mine sucks. I shall write another story soon.
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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 4:39 pm

wah,nice story.Please continued it
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DarkLord_sr


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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 4:58 pm

the english teacher was good, you were lazy.........but the story is good
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Lestat9208


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Posted: Tue Jul 31, 2007 6:39 pm

The english teacher wasn`t good at all. And you might improove your english, DorkLord, since we had the same english teacher. Laughing
And just for the rekord, mr. DorkLord called me and asked "How does "lazy" spell?" Laughing

*sigh* "Imortlas"... Laughing Look who`s talking...
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flameseeker


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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 7:45 am

You bpth in same school? LoL. And he asked you spelling of lazy?
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Lestat9208


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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 10:10 am

Yeah he called me before posting his comment Laughing
And we WERE both in the same school. Now we`re in different high schools (mine`s better, of course Laughing )
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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 12:33 pm

LoL. It doesent make ne difference who is in a better school. The difference is in who has the better brains.......and a smaller ego also helps. Ok, fine. I reprimand myself. The school you study in makes a teensy tinsy difference.
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Lestat9208


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Posted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 7:20 pm

Agreed!
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 2:35 pm

thanks for the advice.....
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 2:35 pm

Okey, fight`s done. I`ve won! Muhaha
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cryoken


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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 2:50 pm

nice imagination but first of all its maiev shadowsong not starsong and if you read mercurial's story it never said that she worked for the night elves

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