Total Votes: 7

Do You Want Me To Continue?

No ending time set.
No 57% [ 4 ]

Yes 42% [ 3 ]

Zero_the_Hero

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First Blood Posts: 30 Joined: 23 Mar 2008 1182 gold

Dota Prison Break

Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 6:17 am

DISCLAIMER: I DON"T OWN THE TV SHOW PRISON BREAK

A beautiful day it was, a day that I would never forget. As I woke up in my bed I felt a rustle under the bed. I checked up and I saw my little pet spider. She was a great pet ever since I was a kid. The breeze of the warm summer comforts me as I play with my two action figures. My life isn't the best but I guess I can live with it. My parents left me when I was 7 and I ever since I have lived on my own. I walked out the house to get a good morning stretch and went back in and made myself breakfast. As I was eating I heard a car stop outside the house. I looked through the window and 2 people that looked like scientists started running to my house. I quickly opened the door as if I knew them. Then they came into the house and said the science lab 2 miles west of here was in trouble. So they told me to bring out 3 items. I quickly ran into my room and got my pet spider and my 2 action figures. They took out a gun and shot a blast at the 3 things. I started crying because I didn't know what was going on and they just shot my 3 precious things. They picked it up in their hands and through it right out of the door. When I saw that sight I got mad and went out to heck on them. Then suddenly when I stopped crying and opened my eyes, I couldn't believe what I saw. My pet spider and the 2 action figures was alive! The scientists told me that 3 terrorists were on their was to kill them. I I looked up at my former favorite things they started talking. Then suddenly all 3 of them looked straight at me and spoke to me. My 2 action figures told me their name and 1 of them was called Yunero and the other one was Mogul Kahn. Then I looked at my former pet and she spoke with a very lady-like voice, she said she was called Brood Mother. I was amazed and suddenly a truck stopped took out guns. I quickly went into the house and stayed with the 2 scientists. Then I heard a loud stump and went outside. As I peeked my new friends has just killed the terrorist. I went out to thank my new friend and heard the police. I knew something bad was going to happen. As I went up to talk to the officers they arrested my friends and me. As Yunero swung his mighty sword I told him to calm down and we were sent into the police car. I instantly knew my life would never be the same. When we arrived we were sent to a jail cell and saw many other creatures and instantly knew we were all alike. That day will be a day I will never forget...
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Zero_the_Hero

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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 6:18 am

Im sorry for my previous stories and realized it was horrible and decided to make a decent story. Now I'm back and better.
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KingV

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Posted: Fri Aug 22, 2008 6:21 am

Laughing

, just

i vote yay, continue this. This sounds like a dream that you had
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940108

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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 7:44 am

is this about dota?i think its not.wat is it about?
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SWORDSMAN69

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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 7:49 am

yeah think this is not bout dota ehh?
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ic4three778

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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 7:59 am

DS is not a story telling siteeeee... Other than Amplirage's great ideas... Very Happy

His is an exception since its about dota... and it rocks...
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SWORDSMAN69

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Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 8:17 am

well you have point there
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flameseeker

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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 7:51 am

@ic4three....wht do u think i am? u think i write romance stories kya?? :S
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Greater Bash

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Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2008 8:38 am

1st reason: It is not about Dota

2nd reason: It is boooooooring
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Working on Axe strategy and if i put it in here then it is true.

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Thx markues1775 for awesome signature!

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