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DrifterZ


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How Akasha became the Queen of Pain

Posted: Mon May 05, 2008 5:49 pm

Chapter 1 - Birth

A young succubus was born in the Hellfire Peninsula and was named Akasha.When Akasha was already 3 years old , she had started her training as she strives to be the next Queen of Suffering.She had killed many things already such as Nether drakes and elementals that appear in the Hellfire Peninsula.
She had kept dreaming on becoming the Queen of Suffering. It makes her more powerful as she had starting to make more creatures suffer.

Chapter 2 - Challenge

After 10 years of training , Akasha suddenly got challenged by a Warden that was lost in the Hellfire Peninsula.Akasha and the Warden had fought , Akasha hit the Warden so multiple times that she had backed out for a few seconds. As soon as Akasha closed her eyes for 1 second , the Warden was infront of her and shot Akasha's mouth with a powerful Shadow Strike which made Akasha scream and had started to master the Scream of Pain thanks to the Warden. The moment she used the Scream of Pain , she had seem to not feel pain as it was being sent to the nearby enemies , hurting them badly.Suddenly while fighting with the Warden , she had understood on how to blink , the skill of the Warden that can make her teleport. She had just put it inside her mind , not trying to do it yet.A moment at battle , when the Shadow Strike's effects were already gone , Akasha's hands suddenly became black and green , glowing with a powerful aura. Akasha waved her hands upward then downward suddenly launching a powerful Shadow Strike towards the Warden.The Warden is slowly dying...The Warden took out her Trump Card , the Avatar of Vengeance.
The Avatar of Vengeance will only disappear if Akasha kills the Warden and to do that , she will have to pass The Avatar of Vengeance.Akasha started to think on how she will get past the Avatar of Vengeance , long enough to kill the Warden , which of course , can still fight.After a while , the Avatar started attacking Akasha , wounding her badly.The Warden suddenly went near and sent out her Fan of Knives and suddenly blinking out of the area for the Avatar of Vengeance to fight her.Akasha as her whole life flashed before her eyes.Akasha did not want to die...She had suddenly become more stronger than ever and had mastered Blink.Akasha suddenly Blinked to the wounded Warden surprising her.
Akasha's hands suddenly glowed with a very powerful blue aura.She had moved both of her hands forward , sending a Sonic Wave towards the Warden , finally killing her.She had realized that she should not fight the weak enemies , but also the strong enemies.

Chapter 3 - The pre-test
The time has come , the testing for the next Queen of Suffering has begun.
Akasha had come to the area of the pre-test , the destroyed Black Citadel.She had seen so many succubus that looked strong.Now the current Queen of Suffering had announced that all must fight each other until only 5 succubus are left.
As soon as the current Queen said "GO!" all the succubus began fighting.Akasha wanted to end it quick and flew up to the center and sent down a Sonic Wave that cleared almost everybody , making sure she had left five succubus but they were all wounded.The Queen of Suffering said: "Impressive work Akasha." and quickly said: "The next test will be held here also after a week. Prepare yourselves."


Chapter 4 - Secret Meeting
A shadow figure appeared infront on the Queen of Suffering as soon as everyone else had left.The figure said, "Who will I take with me?" The Queen answered: "Nobody yet.The test isn't over.Though I see that you will like whom I send to you.Trust me."The shadow figure said,"I see , very well then , I will look forward to the one you will send me."
The shadow figure vanished. The Queen said to herself, "I'm so sorry Akasha but ...you will have to be part of the War of the Ancients as part of the Scourge."

Chapter 5 - The test
The 5 succubus left had come to the Black Citadel.The Queen announced, "The succubus who can kill a 100 fel orc grunts in the least amount of time will be called the "Maiden of Pain". Now All you Succubus , START!"
Soon 100 grunts came after all the succubus , 100 for each. Akasha had unleashed her dreaded Sonic Wave killing more than half of them and leaving the others wounded. She blinked right in the middle of the grunts and used the Scream of Pain which had left her with one last grunt , the grunt was a fel orc Blademaster in disguise , same for all the succubus. The Fel Orc Blademaster began slashing Akasha but Akasha gracefully evaded the attacks and had unleashed Shadow Strike towards the Blademaster , wounding and poisoning him.
The Blademaster had started to spin like a powerful hurricane , towards Akasha and Akasha just blinked out and the Blademaster had stopped spinning , Akasha used her Scream of Pain one last time to end the test.Akasha had apparantly finished in a time of 1 Minute and 27 Seconds. The others had finished with an average of 8 minutes.It was already obvious , Akasha had won , she had proven that she will be the next Queen of Suffering and she already is.The Queen went down to the testing area , making the other four succubus come near her.The Queen quickly took of their heads killing them all.
"Serves them right for not being serious with this test."
Akasha said, "So , is it over?" The Queen said, "Not yet...One Final Test will occur" Akasha was surprised.She thought,"Could it be that my final test is against her?! No..!"The Queen said, "Yes , Your final test is against me. And yes , I can read your mind." "I will give you 1 Day to Rest. After which , go here and you will fight with me."

Chapter 6 - Final Test
Akasha had come to the Black Citadel once again.The Queen appeared behind her and said, "Let the game ,begin."
Akasha blinked away from the Queen of Suffering and sent a Shadow Strike towards her the Queen got hit and used her abilities to quickly go towards Akasha slashing her as Akasha used the Scream of Pain too.The Queen of Suffering went towards behind Akasha stabbing her with multiple knives and suddenly blinking out of the area which made Akasha surprised.Akasha then used the Sonic Wave targeting the ground , not hitting the Queen of Suffering.The Queen of Suffering was going to attack Akasha but suddenly , a Sonic Wave appeared below the Queen of Suffering and hit her from below.Wounding her badly.The Queen then blinked towards the ground as Akasha started hitting her. As soon as Akasha paused for a while , The Queen of Suffering attacked Akasha with a Sonic Wave of her own , a copied version of Akasha's own Sonic Wave.Akasha then blinked behind the Queen of Suffering and used Shadow Strike and Scream of Pain on the Queen , wounding her. Soon the Queen was trying to surrender but Akasha kept hitting her with only one thing in her mind , and that is to make her suffer.Soon , the Queen of Suffering had died and was gone forever.

Chapter 7 - Queen of Pain
After the battle , the same Shadow Figure appeared infront of Akasha saying, "Dearest , you are not a Queen of Suffering....But you are the Queen of Pain and I shall take you with me , to the War of the Ancients and we shall destroy the Sentinel...Soon after the War I will let you go back here...." Akasha replied,"As long As I will get stronger , I accept you invitation"The Shadow Figure transformed into Kel'Thuzad , the Lich and said, "Very well then , Let us make haste , time is being wasted"

The End

Hope you liked it !
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 12:10 am

Nicely done! (~_~)

More works!! ahAh!!

Wink Wink
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 1:37 am

Thanks! Very Happy

You can read my other fanfics , they're by silent_yet_deadly ( ME ) or DrifterZ . Forgot , just check it out Very Happy
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 1:43 am

cool...

where did u get those ideas??

how long did u create that?
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 1:44 am

@i_am_me: I only did it for 10 minutes. You should know how the 11 year old mind flows. Very Happy
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i_am_me


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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 1:47 am

i know...

full of imagination...

i was that kind of kid too... ^^

but sadly i can't express that..

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DrifterZ


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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 1:52 am

I'm still 11 by the way. Lawl.

I hope caspian reads this , he luvs Akasha. XD
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 1:53 am

The Queen of Pain was originally a banshee (undead spirit controlled by the Lich King) until she found her succubus host.
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 1:54 am

Im a youngun too. 13. Yet i am losing my imaginativeness
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 1:54 am

Zohwell. I think if she was born as a succubus , that would be cool.

Anyways , do you like the story caspian?

Its FanFic anyway Very Happy
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 1:56 am

@coco

i'm 14 and i'm losing it too... ^^

@drifterz

yes it's a fanfic so that your "story"

that's ur idea... so what ever it is...

no need to be based on the truth..
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 1:59 am

@i_am_me: Thanks Very Happy

@caspian: your starting to inspire me on making a story , again on akasha regarding her being a banshee at first.

but i'll have to think about how i will type it and such

zohwell. wish me luck Very Happy
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 2:02 am

Good enough, but instead of:

Quote:
As soon as Akasha closed her eyes for 1 second , the Warden was infront of her and shot Akasha's mouth with a powerful Shadow Strike which made Akasha scream and had started to master the Scream of Pain thanks to the Warden.


I might write:

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As soon as she closed her eyes, the Warden was in front of her, hurling a poisonous dagger that struck her lips, sending her into loud screams that could have made human ears burst. Unwittingly, Akasha has learned, and eventually mastered, her powerful screams that the Sentinel would eventually call the Scream of Pain.

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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 2:05 am

@caspian: I think you should write your own stories. ( In a good way. ) You have quite a way with words and by the way , i can't think of that much words. My vocabulary isn't that very wide for an 11 year old , its just semi-very-wide.

XD
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Posted: Tue May 06, 2008 2:05 am

@caspian...

he's good already (to know he is a 11year old boy)

^^

but yours better

@drifterz
another one??
looking forward for it.. ^^
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