Chapter Chain

Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 3:17 pm

xD excellent continuation!

@bloodcraft, you're doing chapter 3 now it looks like
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Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:10 am

nice chapter 2!
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Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:47 am

Will bloodcraft continue for sure? Just to know if I continue the story if I do everything in vein ^^.
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Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2008 3:06 pm

whoever posts the next chapter first gets to do the next chapter! woot!
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 2:07 pm

I like this story and so me shall write the next chapter. Here goes:

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Chapter Three:No Prisoners Taken
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As the centaurs looked on, giant spiders the size of a tank poured out. There were easily a dozen of them, maybe more. The centaurs were only few, half the number of the spiders but thy were not to be afraid and cow under stronger foes.

Overcoming their shock and fear, thy arranged themselves into battle formation, Bradwarden at their head. The spiders clicked and rushed forward, haphazardly. The centaurs with a warcry loud enough to shake a building rushed forward as one. The spiders, who had expected them to cowr and hide in fear were surprised and scattered before the onslaught. A couple of them were hacked to pieces by thee centaurs. But the spiders regrouped and charged.

As the spiders charged, the centaurs in perfect sync steped aside. The spiders rushed forward, confusedand and many were overpowered by the centaurs.But even so, the remaining spiders recovered and each spider took on a centaur, the number equal.The biggest of them all rushed at Bradwarden. The mighty centaur lifted his axe and bought it down on the spiders body. The spiders natural armour crumpled and the centaur followed up with a stomp and another blow to the head. The spider had no chance.

The fight was going on pretty much the same way every where else. Bradwarden rushed to hlp th injured centaurs and soon, the battle was ovr. The centaurs were not fighting to take prisoners and showed no mercy. After a few minutes of battle, the eexhauseted but victorious centaurs walked towards the eafraidreinforcements might arrive. And just as they reached the door, the sticky threads blew apart, entangling the centaurs and out came hundreds of little babies. The centaurs were trapped, being mobbed by spiders. Things definitely looked grim...
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Posted: Sat Aug 16, 2008 7:31 pm

awesomely amazing ^^

someone continue this story! it is shaping up veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery nicely
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Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2008 11:31 am

I suppose we all out of story makers??? Bah...only 3 ppl who can write here?? NVM, if we dont get ne1 else within next 2 days me gonna break rule 2
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Posted: Mon Sep 01, 2008 11:58 am

Chapter 4:Trapped

As the centaurs struggled so that they could get free,but the sticky threads were getting tighter and tighter.The remaining centaurs wondered where the sticky threads are coming from. Then bradwarden thought that he must do something for them.He let out a strong hoof stomp, then the sticky threads began to break.But it is too late a big spider bigger than bradwarden came in sight.

"I think we're cornered warchief".Thornstomper said
"There is still hope child, remember that".Bradwarden replied
"I see reinforcements coming our way".Bradwarden added

Looking at the horizon Thornstomper saw numerous centaurs are coming for help. Someone managed to escape the sticky threads. And escaped without others noticing because of their desire to escape the sticky substance and the scaredness of the warriors. The big spider made a strange sound that shook the forest. Then suddenly an earthquake came, then all of a sudden they saw many spiders as far their cow-like eyes could see.

"They outnumbered us!"Thornstomper shouted"
"They may be many but our troops are faster and stronger than those oversized spiders!"Bradwarden replied then followed with a war cry

The warchief's war cry is the sign that the battle will begin. The centaurs together with their sharpened axes charged forward while the spiders grouped
and moved forward as quick as they came in sight.At the start it is a stalemate but Thornstomper noticed that with every centaur that the spiders killed new spiders come from the dead corpses of the dead giants.
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End of My part
Hope you like it
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Posted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 7:35 am

ummm...in case u didnt notic, chapter 3 is already posted so pls edit ur chapter 3 and make it chapter 4
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Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 12:17 pm

hey no more writers or they really don't like the topic^^
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Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 5:53 pm

edward, fristly, u cat see the horizon in a cave. secondly there are lots of grammar mistake i will send u the edited draft, put it up, ok?
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Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 6:25 pm

-----------------Chapter 5----------------

And so, Thornstomper yelled after his keen observation, "Cut down the webbing! I will hold them off!"

Bradwarden, "I shall help!"
Thornstomper, "No, the warriors need your strength to help them, I shall be fine."
Bradwarden, "Fine, just...be safe my Thornstomper."
Thornstomper, "Do not fret, I have a way to get the webbing down quickly, and will join you thereafter."
Bradwarden, "But what could possibly destroy those webs so quickly?"

Thornstomper tosses a vial he found in his pack at Bradwarden. "It is a vial of Alchmist's Fire, given to me by Razzil Darkbrew long ago. Let us pray it still works."
Bradwarden, "My thanks. TO ME WARRIORS! Form up and lets get these webs down!"

Bradwarden tosses the vial at the webs, burning them to cinders, although not entirely destroying them all.

Meanwhile, Thornstomper stood alone against the giant spider, known to all as the Broodmother. Fangs dripping with poison, they faced off in mortal combat...

*Que the really intense Mortal Kombat Music*

With a stomp of his great hooves, Thornstomper charged recklessly into the battle, with no regrets if he didn't make it out alive..



Edit, referred Thornstomper to be Bradwarden's son by mistake.
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 3:43 am

I feel so left out, my first story in Fan Fiction and no one says shit.
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 3:55 am

^ i liked it.
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Posted: Sun Sep 07, 2008 4:01 am

I feel...so appreciated now.
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