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Menos Grande- Big Emptiness

Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2008 11:21 pm


Menos Grande - Big Emptiness
Range: 500 | Move Speed: 300
Primary: INT
Str: 17 + 1.8 | Agi: 21 + 2.1 | Int: 24 + 2.8
Damage: 49 - 58 | HP: 473 | Mana: 312
HP Regen: 0.76 | Mana Regen: 0.97
Attack Speed: 1.35 | Armor: 2
Side: Scourge

STORY:
When the scourge was a great loss, most of the warriors fled for safety thinking it would be the fall of the frozen throne. Demnok Lannik and other heroes left behind tried to summon an army known as the Legion to aid them until something went terribly wrong, the dark mana of the heroes sunk into the depths of time and space until it came back with a beast known as a Menos Grande.No one can could ever stop the beast because of its great insanity that can slow the enemies down;But when the Lich King saw him, the Lich King tries to convince the beast to join the scourge but the Menos still don't listen and continuing the insanity to the enemies but when the Lich King seize the Menos Grande, the Menos has stopped what he was doing because he realize that the scourge was in a great loss.So, the Menos Grande was forced to join the scourge and trying to eliminate the sentinels.

SkillS:

Cero (C)
Throws off damage, depending on how long he want it to last.No mana the Cero will be deactivated.350 AoE.
Level 1 - 12 damage per second/costs 30 mana per second.
Level 2 - 28 damage per second/costs 40 mana per second.
Level 3 - 35 damage per second/costs 90 mana per second.
Level 4 - 49 damage per second/costs 110 mana per second.
Mana Cost: 30/40/90/110
Cooldown: 25
Framework: Throws of a black round that is big and if someone will get in they'll get damage per second.
NOTE: Not a channeling skill.

Insanity Orb (B)
Throws a dark small orb in the area and blasts in a 350 AoE that can damage the enemy a bit,and also it causes the opponents nearby to slow down a bit.
Level 1 - 5% slow;45 damage to all who has been hit.
Level 2 - 8% slow;75 damage to all who has been hit.
Level 3 - 12% slow;105 damage to all who has been hit.
Level 4 - 18% slow;135 damage to all who has been hit.
ManaCost:90/130/170/210
Cooldown:40/35/30/25

Twilight Break
Because of the having an insanity huge spirit pressure, Menos can call upon other Ceros who hunger for souls.(Passive)
Level 1 - 2% chance to summon 1 Menos, Menos deals 30% damage and recieves 300% damage from the enemies.
Level 2 - 4% chanceto summon 2 Menos, Menos deals 50% damage and recieves 200% damage from the enemies.
Level 3 - 6% chanceto summon 3 Menos, Menos deals 65% damage and recieves 150% damage from the enemies.
Level 4 - 8% chanceto summon 4 Menos, Menos deals 85% damage and recieves 125% damage from the enemies.

Grand Ray Cero (G)
A Menos' final frontier, the Menos gathers damage and realeases it a percentage stronger.
Level 1 - Gathers damage for 3 seconds, then releases it 15% stronger.
Level 2 - Gathers damage for 5 seconds, then releases it 30% stronger.
Level 3 - Gathers damage for 8 seconds, then releases it 50% stronger.
Mana Cost: 140/170/200
Cooldown: 60/50/40
NOTE: This will not charge...Menos will buff himself and after the time comes he will shoot a big ray to the enemy.So enemies you better Matrix.

Last edited by laufer on Sat Sep 13, 2008 5:50 am; edited 2 times in total

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Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 12:06 am

Ummm.. I have a bunch of questions about this guy. Also, if you want I will edit your hero story for you.
1st skill: does it hold the enemy in the dark circle? Is this a channeling spell?
2nd skill: is this the same as degen aura for purist? If so, I would recomend changing this into something new.
3rd skill: Is this a percentage chance to spawn images? I'm not really sure what this skill does exactly but it sounds imba at lvl 4.
ULT: not sure if I understand this one properly. Do you take all incoming damage and return it back at the end od the spell sort of like Abadons shield?
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Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 2:55 am

Bard Man will try to help here.


This hero is based off of a beastie from the anime series Bleach. A Menos Grade is the end result of HUNDREDS of smaller creatures known as Hollows being chushed together by some greater will to form a massive Hollow the size of a scyscraper.

First skill: No this is not a channeling spell. From what Bard Man can tell, it works like Nova. You turn it on and deal damage to everyone around you while going about your business.

Second skill: I'm assuming this is the same as Purist's Degen Aura. And Bard Man agrees, this should be changed.

Third Skill: I'm assuming Ceros means Hollow in our friend's language. And from what I can tell, this is Juxtapose, but stronger. Change would be a good idea.

Ultimate: Again, this is assumption based off Bard Man's knowledge of Bleach and how laufer is decribing it. The Ultimate is not like Anophtic Shield. It's more like Illuminate with a channel. basicly, carge and fire. Longer you charge, the more damage you do. Not a good skill in my opinion.

This hero needs some major re-working. Still, not bad for a first try.
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This is the point from which I could never retreat,
cause if I turn back now there can never be peace.
This is the point from which I will die and succeed,
living the struggle, I know I'm alive when I bleed.
From now on it can never be the same as before,
cause the place that I'm from doesn't exist anymore.

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Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 2:59 am

Yeah. Just a question, why do you make dream heroes everyday?
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hello....

Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 5:42 am

1st Skill: not channeling

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Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2008 4:39 pm

this hero's spells are mostly unoriginal
i advice a remake
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