A symphony of war

A symphony of war

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 6:38 am

I'm new to writing so yeah I might suck.

Chapter 1: The flight of the Harbinger.

Rikimaru also know as the "stealth assassin" hid in the shadows.
Malfurion had asked him to scout around the river for he sensed a coming danger a Harbinger; unknown to Malfurion what such a creature would danger itself for.

Rikimaru hid just next to the river, it's mystical energy flowing everywhere chilling the hair s on Rikimaru's back. The river was said to be an avatar of the Well of Eternity, the only thing separating the scourge and the sentinel for it dark magics has stolen so many. But that was not the point.

Suddenly a odd creature appeared over the horizon. It did the impossible and crossed the river which did nothing to impede it's travel. Rikimaru looked on shocked.

"HERE ME ALL FOR I AM THE OBSIDIAN DESTROYER, AND THE HARBINGER OF THE LICH KING YOU SHALL ALL FALL" shouted the Obsidian monstrosity.

"Shit" exclaimed Rikimaru. "I have to get out of here and tell Malfurion" Rikimaru ran quietly but stealthily in the shadows
and as he saw back an unfortunate treant happened across the Harbinger, and was killed in a radical explosion.

And as fear hit Rikimaru he disappeared. Into an Astral universe numbers,letters,rune and more scrolled the world. So mind numbing Rikimaru's head would explode had he tried to understand it's meaning. And as fast as he disappeared he was back in the mortal plan.

"What happened?" Rikimaru asked himself. And suddenly the Harbinger was upon him! "A little trick your invisibility; but nothing a little gem can't see!" laughed the Harbinger.
"A gem of true sight! What a guy" thought Rikimaru.

Rikimaru inspired mostly by fear attacked. He teleported behind the Harbinger struck him and ran. He ran towards the river fear controlling his body. The Harbinger gave chase. "Almost there!" thought Rikimaru; "I'm gonna make it!". And as his hope faded as fast as it was gained, blood red energies surrounded him.
"Sanity Eclipse" shouted the Harbinger. Rikimaru screamed in pain and was no more.

I hope it's good. I know it's short and there are errors =/.

Chapter 2: Malfurion's plan, Attack of the herald.

Thankfully Malfurion was no fool. He knew that a monster was coming and Rikimaru would die. He had a special assassin, Lanya a Templar of olden times. She had just seen everything that had occured and was reporting back. Malfurion sat brooding over the loss of Rikimaru. His purple hands rubbed his chin. He sat and he thought. Now that the Lich king has found away over the river what do we do? It'll only be a matter of time before he sends more of his wretched minions. And after hours of thinking Lanya arrived. "Malfurion, sir!" she said. "What information about the beast have you gathered" replied Malfurion hoping that he could use this to counter the beast. "The beast is an Obsidian construct made living, it seems to have extreme intelligence perhaps rivaling you my lord, it possess so far three shown abilities; they include a form of Astral imprisonment, the ability to charge his two rods with arcane magic, and finally a ability it names Sanity Eclipse, also it seems to have an odd aura around it". "I see....." replied Malfurion.

The Harbinger stormed the forests of the Night Elves; Elves, nor Orc, Tauren, nor Human, the Herald plowed his way through them like a hot knife through butter. Unimpeded the creature arrogantly went forth, every so often sniffing the air with it unseen nose. "Puny weakling how could the Lich king be unable to fight them" the Harbinger exclaimed over a dead Druid, while sucking it's magicks. Growing larger.....and stronger.....

Malfurion rode on his deer-like creature odd and mystical it's nature a creature from Cenarius, he rode with his fellow companions, an experienced shadow hunter Vol'jin, and the famed Anti-mage Magina, brother to Terrorblade the traitor. Malfruion had previously chosen these two to ride with him as a counter attack to the Harbinger. "Wait" whispered Malfurion very suddenly. "What it be mon" replied Vol'jin. "He is here!" shouted Malfurion at the both of them while transforming four trees into sentient being known as Treants. "Raaargh" shouted the Harbinger coming out significantly larger than previously. The Herald of the Lich king quickly dispatched Vol'jin and Magina to an Astral plane to fight the famed Prophet and perhaps the most powerful man in the world head on.

They clashed the Herald shooting out Arcane orbs of power at Malfurion who easily dispatched it. Malfurion ran towards the Harbinger jumped over it's head and shot a root out of his staff grabbing one of the rods and pulling it away. "Heh I've gotten a rod what now; you will pay for what you did to Rikimaru whom I was so close to curing his Satyr ailment. But the Harbinger only replied with odd gurgling. Quickly the Harbinger shot out dozens of purple-black magic balls at Malfurion whom of which summoned the Treants to block. Countering Malfurion summoned up roots to grab the Harbinger and teleported behind him quickly sending multiple roots from his staff that only narrowly missed the Harbinger one stabbing it. Despite the injury the Harbinger continued it's assault, make a gurgling sound that Malfurion distinguished as him saying "WHERE IS THE STAFF I NEED IT!". "Staff?" Malfurion pondered while dodging the Harbinger relentless attempts to hit him apparently unable to charge his attacks with faster more powerful strikes without his second rod. And as Malfurion pondered he was interrupted by a loud gurgle which Malfurion knew was meant to say Sanity eclipse as red energies were coming for him at that moment! A large explosion surrounded the area trees were knocked down for miles. But Malfurion stood there unaffected. Was it the gods? Perhaps the Harbinger missed? Only the lords knows what but his survival wasn't without consequences. Malfurion stood up and suddenly his leg went numb. He fell down energy drained. And the Harbinger flew over him laugh maniacally having found the staff. "Yes....I now have the Mystic staff.....now I only need something to enhance my self...and I will no longer be the horse carrying the king, but king will be carrying the horse; I will be the King of the Lich king none will defeat me.


Malfurion knew now what it wanted. It was the Mystic staff had he known it was hidden here he would've destroyed it. "I am now coherent....you...Malfurion proved a challenge...but not enough...now die Malfurion the proph-" before it could finish lightning struck the monstrosity. Vol'jin was the first out He quickly began to bombarded the Harbinger with lightning. "You be alright mon" Vol'jin shouted to Malfurion.
"I'll live" he replied. "Where is Magina?"
"He most likely not be finished with the puzzle" replied Vol'jin
"Puzzle?" replied Malfurion
"Later for dat mon" "We be gettin o-"
The Harbinger admist the talking had taken his rods and with the power of the Mystic staff shot back the troll. "Die foolish troll none can match up to me if Malfurion can you couldn't either!" shouted the Harbinger deafeningly at Vol'jin. "Never; for Rikimaru!" shouted Malfurion suddenly aiming a staff with a red gem at the Harbinger.
"NO! The Dagon!" screamed the Harbinger fearfully
"Die!" shouted Malfurion with a powerful voice. Red lightning shot out of the red staff called "Dagon" it blasted the Harbinger straight through.

Magina popped out of nowhere onto the ground with a sighing about how he missed all the "fun"
"Hey mon, weren't you supposed to study the creature mon?" said Vol'jin
"Ah, I have a fragment of it powers in my crystal I did it when I had his rod" replied Malfurion
"That be smart let us be of then" replied Vol'jin

And as they left....blue energies formed black skin covered it, two rods appeared in two black disgusting hands, wing appeared, and so did horse feat..."None will defeat the King of the Lich king..."

Another grammatically wrong chapter by me.

Last edited by Going2hell on Tue Jul 24, 2007 8:10 am; edited 2 times in total

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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 6:56 am

nice !!!



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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 7:02 am

Yeah.It's kinda short but it's very good.Write some more!

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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 8:39 am

Nice one but many grammatical errors. I can edit this for you if you want. Just send me a copy of this through PM and i will correct it and give the edited copy back. And also continue on this please. If you want me to edit, please please try and read my fan-fic and comment. If you cant read mine, i will still edit this for you.
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 2:50 pm

lol,why did you use my title?!.....=.=....(nevermore:that was my plan).....best if you can change the title a bit because i am planning more stories using "the defense of the ancients" k?please..............

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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2007 3:56 pm

LOL. that really is your title? But if he chanes now, people will face difficulty in reading this again as this story will look like it has been magicked away. Welll. Solve it out between yourselves.
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 12:16 pm

@ flameseeker
nah....what if i write stories using your titles?.....surely you will feel like i've stolen your title. anyways,you can keep it if you want,going2hell.....i don't mind...write more of it....
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 12:22 pm

hmm.. quite good.
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2007 2:56 pm

Well.I would feel pretty bad but then I would let him have his title. I was and am alwayas so soft-hearted.....Poor me. Still, i agree that you feel bad, infact i am feeling bad for you. But still....
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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 6:47 am

Sorry for stealing your title D=. I'll Pm you a copy of the next chapter.

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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 6:52 am

great!!!!>>


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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 7:11 am

don't be sorry......i already said you can use it in my last post...

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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 8:07 am

Poor Rikimaru...

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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 12:39 pm

Poor Poor dog(that is me- you want proof. Here: Bow Bow- that is dog language rite?). Whay isnt this story being continued?
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