SEPTEMBER SONATA

SEPTEMBER SONATA

Posted: Sat Jul 28, 2007 3:09 pm

I'll See You There
Boush, the Tinker

Hands working on withered oars,
I can’t ignore this sensation.
The canopy once lively and green,
Burnin’ into desolation.

An old friend’s body, battered and bruised,
Wounds screaming multilation.
His breaths are heavy and heaved,
Riding on the edge of termination.

Was it my fault? I do not know;
My mind fills with hesitation.
A missle, a compromise, a reanimated comrade;
A battle of pure attrition.

Tell me, silent friend of mine,
Did you see salvation?
Undoubtedly, one day I’ll know,
As this world bows to devastation.

Hey dude, I’ll see you there,
Where utopia meets realization.
Yeah, I’ll see you there,
In that little place: the one we aptly name ‘Heaven’.

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A/N - As some of you might have guessed, this poem is adapted from and dedicated to Ninjadiner and his work, 'Upon a Pale Horse'. smile.gif
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Posted: Mon Jul 30, 2007 7:56 am

Well, it's got a nice flow, where does "September Sonata" come into the poem?
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The people we have lost...and the dreams that have faded...never forget them...
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On the eigth day the lords said "let there be awesomeness" and there was me.

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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 7:41 am

Maybe its a summer poem or maybe the poem takes place in september
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 7:46 am

I hate the Rain!!!

Damn these day

August 09, 2007
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I always have this strange feeling........
I think my Mother is an Alien

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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 7:50 am

Hey man stick to the topic. Anyway, its better off because theres no classes today
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Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 8:02 am

You invite us to write poems in september?Um.Hate school,like most ppl here,and don't like literature..

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