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No ending time set.
quite nice and i really like it!!! 0% [ 0 ]

okielar 100% [ 1 ]

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that was horrible,you should stop writing 0% [ 0 ]

Lonewolf

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Destined Fate

Posted: Thu Aug 09, 2007 9:00 pm

yea as i promise..another fanfic...sort of b4 you read....it not bout dota char or anything relate to it...It is a short essay that i wrote...quite sometime ago and i wished to shared with you guys(plus i in da right place to post right,modz??) so enjoy~
_|Fate|_
It has been a year since that fateful day, i still wonder why our fate was destined to be like that and why God has been so cruel to me. She was the most understanding person I
have ever met beside myself and my late parents. At first, we were just normal friends but as time past….in the blink of an eye, our bond had grown and we become really close. She was the most important person in my life, giving me hope and curing me of my loneliness. My parent had passed away and she was the only one who could ease the pain that i had endured in this bitter and cruel life.I started to gain back my confidence and continue to pursue my dream of being a singer. She was very supportive and cheered me up whenever I was feeling down. I worked so hard to achieve my dream so I could live with her forever and happily ever after. My life had certainly turn around; I usually lived in despair,hoping to end my life sooner or later since it was meaningless. After the death of my parents, not even one of my relatives came. I had never expected them to be like this…acting in such a selfish manner. Often I wondered whether they remembered how my parents had helped them out when they were in trouble.Since then I cursed my life and hated everything. I never got out from my house. I just sat at my room in darkness, reminiscencing the past and how I missed my parents. Finally I took some drastic action, I decided to joined my parent and I took a knife and cut my wrist. My hand was bleeding profusely and I thought that I was going to die but my neighbour managed to save me just in time. i was rushed to the hospital as soon as possible.When I woke up, I saw the white ceiling. At first I thought that it was heaven but I was mistaken. When I turned to my left, I saw a girl sleeping next to me. i was shocked and my action startled her. Apparently she was my neighbour ,she noticed that my front door was not locked so she came and checked it out. It did not take her long to find me lying in a pool of blood.And that was how I met her, and since then we have been living together. But one day she demanded that we should move to a new place and sell off my house, She had
already sold off hers and insisted I did the same. At first I disagreed, but she was so persistent that I finally gave in. Well I could not resist her sparkling eyes so we moved to an apartment. It actually not a bad idea since that place was near to her working place. After my parents death, I had never worked and my money was soon depleted. But one
day…something happened and it changed everything, we were watching Korean drama and I am really couldn’t stand it thus I often dozed off. She noticed I dozed off and kissed me, hoping to wake me up. When our ips touched, her nose bleeds. At first I thought she was too high but then I find it strange so I brought her to a clinic and checked on it. To
my horror she was suffering from leukaemia and she was in critical condition. i was scared to death when I listened to it but she acted as if there is nothing had happened.
My dream finally did came true and I am having my concert the next day. I brought her along and played the song that I was going to play the next day to her. Before I started, she suddenly collapsed and her nose bleed profusely. I quickly grabbed her and carried her to the hospital. But the situation worsened and it started to rain. Her blood flowed and stained her clothes. i was scared to death when I saw it and run as fast as I could to bring her to the nearest hospital to treat her. Even I slipped and fall, it doesn’t
stopped and slowed me a bit. When I reached there, the doctor said that she could only last till the next day. I look at her when she tried her best to wave at me to catch my attention. She wanted to listen to the music i would play for her the next day. The next day, I gave her handphone to her. Then I left the hospital and headed straight to the
concert hall as fast as I could. When I reached the concert hall, I immeaditely called her and l could heard her soft voice calling my name. I played the piano while sang after I put my handphone above the piano. After my performance, she had passed away after I finnish playing. I noticed there was a message from her so I opened it. She managed to type a message encouraging me to keep on living and not to give up on life. I burst into tears when I read it. If only I could stop the time and go back in time, i wish I could know her earlier and spend more time with her since she was the only one that I love so deeply…
Fin / The End

Bleh!

hOpE yOu EnJoY iT Bleh!

p.s...try playing this music from this link when you reading the bold section(the last part)urghh....timing not nice Hysterical

but still...err read slowly lol Bleh!

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